Hanish_Ram
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Why Mc is hugging shields agents thigh he should be involved in main plot but your form of writing is good 👍but Mc is overdramatic please don’t make him like deadpool it is disgustingly bad and please make Mc little bit colder I mean don’t show every emotion outside
I think you all people are laughing but here the Mc is not a good person I guess we can add antihero tag I don’t know if it is added already
So it is not Kant it is Kang
But Kant also played in shaping Loki’s destiny why did he blame Loki are they both Mc and Loki same as Mc is much more selfish and hypocritical than Loki
Bro I am not criticising you I genuinely liked this novel I hope you continue this novel and I also have some suggestions like don’t do Crossovers it may no it will definitely spoil the flow of the story it will create chaos if you wanna write novels on movies I suggest you opt for non supernatural or sci-fi movies or tv series but they should have action on the basis of our novel writing skills this is my suggestion I hope you continue doing this good job 👍 and keep it up 👍
I think Mc here is again like cold Chinese Mc with no empathy only crave for power it’s very disgusting
Please don’t crossover to anything it will spoil the whole plot points it will get mixed up so focus on Dc and complete Dc plot then you can again make Mc travel to other multiverse though some spac time. Wormhole or something etc so PLEASE DONT CROSS OVER TO ANY OTHER ANIME ,MOVIE, COMIC ETC AND PLEASE DONT ADD HAREM THIS PACE IS GOOD AND IT HAS GOOD TECHNICAL ASPECT AND ALSO DO SOME RESEARCH ON BIOLOGY TO MAKE THE PLOT LOOK REALISTIC AT PRESENT IT IS 👍 👍👍👍