I find this novel very interesting. I have never seen like it before nor have i read any other novels that focuses on the dream aspect. It also has a few writing errors but nothing major so it would still be pretty clear. Besides all that, another reason why i like this novel is because it has a very interesting world background and storyline. Overall, it has a great story.

The plot of this novel is somewhat similar to the plot of a webnovel i once read. I can't really remember it's name though.

According to what i learned in school, Chastity is actually just the virtue of lawful intercourse. Meaning that you don't follow the virtue of Chastity if you do unlawful intercourse like having intercourse when your single.

or a farm containing divine materials of all attributes with it's rank being equal to Kireina's Rank.

Just use the Check in, Power and Energy Stones to get 3 Fast Pass which will allow you to unlock three locked chapters.

The Character Design and World Background is fine and Even Though I Only Read A Few Chapters, I Can Also Tell That The Story is Developing Well. But I Have A Few Comments Regarding Some Problems That I Noticed In The Earlier Chapters in the Novel. One, There's No Dialogue Whatsover. Lastly, The Author is giving way too many Details About What's Happening in the Novel All The Time. I Mean, This is The First Time Ever That I Have Seen A Novel With No Dialouge and Just Details and Narrating.

I Hope That The Author Uses Past Tense/Participle.

I Would Say That The Story Development Of This Novel Is Terrible. Everything That Either Happened To Nivra or His Actions Seem Really Forced Which I Can Tell When I Read The First Two Chapters Of This Novel. Though, I Did Only Read Two Chapters Though But I Can Tell That The Story Would Develop In A Way Related To Luck. Why Would I Say That The Story Development Is Terrible and Seemed Forced? From The First Chapter, It Seemed Forced Because He Just Saw An Ad About The VRMMO Itself And The Game Was Just Literally Delivered A While Later Without Even Any Preparations From Nivra Whatsoever. Then During The Character Creation, All His Actions Lack Reasoning. He Doesn't Have A Good Background Which Complemented The Fact That The Story Development Seemed Forced. Overall, The Story Development Lacks Reasoning Behind Every Action Which What I'm Complaining About. I Mean Other Novels With The Same Genre I Read Has Reasoning Behind Every Story Development.

Dude Write More Chapters, I Am Very Curious Of What Game The Gods Would Make And How The MC's Luck Would React To It.

Oh Common Author, Why The Cliffhanger? Can't You Just Release The Next Chapter!!! Man, I'm Wondering, What Would Happen To Kireina After Having All Seven Deadly Sins and Heavenly Virtues.

I Agree With Your Statement.

If She's Planning To Buy Remaining 5 Deadly Sins and Seven Heavenly Virtue Then Obviously Her Divinity Would Be Different.

I Wonder When Kireina Is Going To Become A True God? I Mean She Wouldn't Benefit Staying A Mortal Other Than Being Able To Stay in The Mortal World With No Cost Anyway.

I Predict That The City Would Be Made In That Mysterious Place.

Though I Wonder What The Forms Of Gaia's Family Would Look Like (The Acquired Family Members of Gaia's Family I Mean).

That Sure Was A Complete Massacre Huh. Though For The Hephaestus Family, Its Simply Extinction. Though The Battle With The Hephaestus Family is Harder Than The Battle With The Thanatos Kingdom Which Was An Easy Battle For Kireina's Family, Empire and Pantheon.

Good Luck Author But I Hope You Don't Take Too Long, Your Story is Great.

How Is This Even Seeing A Memory Huh? This is More Like Accessing A Different Reality.

Why Didn't His Uncle and Aunt Know That His Parents are Dead? I Mean Aren't The Authorities Supposed To Inform Them.

The Novel is Fine. I Like The World Background and Plot But There are Some Parts That Doesn't Make Sense at All and Most Importantly, Some Chapters are Repeated Which Clearly Disrupts The Story Development. If Not For This Problem, I Would Have Ranked This Novel's Story Development Higher.