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his grandmother is druella black from the rosier family before marrying cygnus black III
Four familys but u wrote only 3: Blacks Malfoys and Lestranges
grandson* instead of granddaughter
almightyP diddy
how its all going for you mate
damn no reply, thats sad man
I think that fitts better the Obito pre Madara than Shisui
I can understand that u could inspire but check out ur first chapter and the one of Wind Calamity, other than that its a good fic and keep up with the good job
I mean the first chapter is a copy but after that is a different story i just dont really understand why would u copy that much the first chapter tho
Hmm literally a copy of Wind Calamity but changing the names