hyorinmaru
Why so serious?
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We see Luffy clash with other king haki users in almost every big villain in the new world. It’s a lot more common in the new world. I’m not saying anything bad about the ability, but V.O.A.T is more interesting in my opinion.
Reminds me of this. “Grandpa, you still in there?”
A refreshing take on Dumbledore. A vast majority of fanfics portray him as a dark lord in plain sight or a manipulative old man that treats everyone as a pawn on a chessboard. I will admit that Dumbledore in the movies made mistakes, but the old man did have a heart despite everyone believing otherwise.
But he wouldn’t hurt a fly. Just look at that innocent smile
Let me start this review off with something positive. I'll gladly admit that you’re far better than most fanfic authors on this app, but I am somewhat concerned with the abrupt change from Traning/Battle maniac to psychopathic killer. I wouldn't mind killing if it made sense, but reading about the MC killing randoms for nonsensical reasons was a major mood killer. He went straight to killing without any motive other than basic information or because their fear gave him a sense of sick satisfaction. Sorry for rambling on and on, I hope you continue to improve despite any negative reviews you receive.
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That’s a good theory. I think that it fits One Piece better as a whole. Voice Of All Things seems like an ability that is truly rare. (Not that Kings Haki isn’t rare, but we see it quite a lot.)