I am a writer and reader who just loves writing and all things fantasy! It makes me really happy when others read and like my work too! I hope you will keep reading it!
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As a fellow lazy person, I appreciate the sentiments chapter. But more than that I appreciate that you are writing a female lead story with no ML. Not every FL needs to build her life around an ML and the repetitive tired trope of an FL’s life becoming complete once she has a baby is just a yuck-fest. I have always had to read ML novels because the FL novels are usually so built around the romance aspect that it feels that an FL is not a complete person without a guy. Now if only someone can write a FL cultivation novel without romance… also, I cannot read tortured, painful love stories, so really glad you didn’t go that route and I got a chance to read this! Keep it up!
Cut “only” from where it is and paste in front of “having”, so “only having”.
It’s a “video game”, so the game designer had to decide what made a game character. It seems like a game character object requires a two child objects, a soul and a body, because the body cannot be without a soul, or else it would die when the player logged out. Maybe?
Aura of Time = very old Timelessness = ageless
Poor Scholar Baked Galaxy
I enjoyed Lui li’s personal description of killing the 12 old demons. It was extremely funny I just couldn’t leave a paragraph comment at the time and founD that sad
Author, I mentioned before that one of your scenes was very familiar even down to the criminal law book and I wasn’t sure who copied whom, but now that you have copied yet another scene from a different book, it’s pretty clear who copied whom. Are any of the scenes in this book your original work or do you just string together your favorite parts of other books?
Sure it can! Sometimes Mothers simply don’t care about the well -being of their children. Not every woman is capable of being a good mother, some are just too broken. I’ve read a lot of Webnovels where the mother hates the daughter because she’s not her child. But in reality, there’s not always a good excuse, like the daughter is adopted. Anyway, I agree with you because this is a story, the DNA test is a must. Lol
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
Okay, thanks for Letting me know. I’ll see if I messed something up and if not, I’ll contact the moderators! I’m so sorry about this.