writting quality? while there are mistakes they are negligeable. Stability of updates? author loves editing every chapter which resets reading progress in library and makes it hard to acccess the fic because of said editing. clearly author has no concept of a google documents. Story development? for the first 40 chaps it was average after it just straight descend. the story with potential turned bland and uniteresting. you could skip 200 words or couple of chaps and still would have clear idea what's happening. Character design? At first realistic later pessimistic cretin. World background? a lot of stealing from other works so propably author didn't find the need for better story background.

interesting, hope it won't end that quickly

build a giant wall* hero doesn't have system to just buy it outright and pop it to existence

question: while i myself isn't that good of an author and wouldn't be able to continue this novel, would you agree for someone to create a spin off of the story?

i can't talk about writing quality since i'm not good with that myself since some chaps are locked i won't talk about stability story: mc has too clear memory of things, most people will have at most hazy memory of things they've did in the past if they didn't repeat that thing memories much. Mc also for some fuckin reson just jumps into bed of women, stress can make someone less rational but for **** sake mc is going for sage look but he doesn't care about stds characters are lifelike world background aside from being a little unrealistic it's okay

not to sound rude but took you long enough

*spoiler Samuel is evil eisen can use minor magic irl im on 612 chapter.

hey author, I suggest you read "spending my retirement in a game" similar setting to your own novel except that one is mainly about crafting but not only. It would be great if eldarian could do the same as Eisen irl

Okay i've posted the novel on royal road, additionaly im working on fixing typos and grammar. Also old chapters will be released on the weekend, each new chapter will be posted once a week

i've already submited the work on rr and im only waiting for a bot

a litlle too late... I've already submited a ticket to Royal Road to allow me to post it there and i've made the submissions

Could you also read my novel? Tt's still very short (under 8k words)

Writting quality a few errors here and there, i'm not good at gramar myslef so i didn't see grammatical mistakes. I've read the whole novel in 7 hours Story is quite engaging. Mix of sherlock holmes and dense anime protagonist. Characters are lifelike and immersive. Each character and most of the story is explained making a pretty good background.

Magnito? Dude it's Magneto

https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=p_8yK2kmxoo&ab_channel=Kurzgesagt%E2%80%93InaNutshell

could you show where i made mistakes? i'm currently working on this novel alone so it's a little hard to see all of the mistakes

maybe? who knows?

if ya think this time skip is bad please read "Tree of Aeons" first

it's about jeff and his travels tech priest will show up soon

12:17 in the video