SundanceKid

I know it's probably inevitable but I hope he just hits and quits Xiao. She's super lame compared to the rest of his harem.

I really enjoy this novel even though the grammar is lacking, but author, you really need to figure out a way to make power levels more clear and concise. There's been two different sets of cultivation shown and then there's the leveling system, then there's racial traits etc. It's far too convoluted and it's doing a disservice to a pretty entertaining story. If you want to add all these different ways for the MC to gain strength you need a baseline stat page that can show the sum of everything.

He should have just left them in the other realm to train instead of indulging them and having it causing issues. If he was gunna be around them I'd understand but letting them just roam free in a world full of murim psychos is a bit brain rot on MCs part lol

That was a fun chapter lol. I really want him to destroy this Michael douche and that bitch Amelia, it'll probably be a while though since he's still super weak comparatively.

Jeez there's too many enemies already this early on when he's so weak. He'll need some strong plot armor to catch up or surpass these people soon.

Why are you turning the MC into such a douchebag? Stealing stuff from other people now because it looks old??? He's already kind of an asshole, don't make him trash as well, it will be hard to root for him if you keep going down that path.

This new villain is immensely cheesy, please kill him off fast lol

So now he's literally forced to kill this Queen who may actually be a good person, just she has a daughter who's a retard and made the MC have brain rot for a bit because of her actions? Idkkkkk about this..

This coach just doesn't make sense. If Ken were a real person he would be one of the best pitchers in the entire world, including professional players if he has a 102 mph fastball that he could control, on top of his other pitches, yet here he is not starting again, because why? Dude doesn't deserve to be head coach.

The sports portion of this story is great, but the fact that most of the romance has just been soap opera level bad is a big issue. Just stick to wholesome romance if it's a weak point in your writing but you still want it integrated. All this random creepy fuck drama isn't needed at all and really adds negatives to a great story so far.