David_Jenkins_5439

This was perfect made me cry enough said

Love your other works. This looking good so far. Interesting concept looking forward to see where this goes.The rest is filler àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Love.the.chapter but what is gouging on with look like the rough draft being in closed its confusing me as to what tis going on

Also what about tech gifted to humans like asgard beaming tech from stargate. Or tech reversed engineered like the crystal computers from the gould

What about tech from the star gate tv series? Some of the the advanced races were human like the tollans. You could even call the ancients human too since technically they are a precusere to the modern humans and even Inter breed ed with them.

Natasha cause the others come with tom much baggage and the baggage Natasha comes with can be dealt with money and upgrades

have you considered that this could easily turn into harry causing the system apocalypse 😕

Doctor who quote for the win with the trap speech at the end

Sound to me that harry remade the colt from the tv show supernatural. Too cool next up a lightsaber

Love the story keep up the good work. Wish it was updated more often but ill take what I can get. Great character development you perfectly pulled of the overlooked but lazy and bored main character