Jane_Chunli
I'm just a normal girl who loves writing and living life to the fullest.
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It's a nice story line especially the part of Elizabeth who tries to blow up her house because of the atomic bomb she's building or stuff. The grammar is nice but I find it a bit chaotic, trying to differentiate the characters and povs. I don't know when sean is speaking or when authur or Emma is speaking. I hope the author make out time to make their characters more understandable. Other than that, I think I like emma's character. She's a strong character. And there storyline is nice. Good job author.
I must say I'm impressed author. No grammatical errors and I love how the character are built. Their attitudes and skills. Feels to me, I'm watching a pirate movie. I have always been into pirate moves but this is the first transmigration novel I have ever read and I must say, I like it. It's nice and I like the flow. I'm still reading tho. Everything is nice and in accordance but I'm not much into magic or occult stuff but I will make an exception to this lol. fighting author💪💪💪[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]