Review Detail of Jane_Chunli in Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

It's a nice story line especially the part of Elizabeth who tries to blow up her house because of the atomic bomb she's building or stuff. The grammar is nice but I find it a bit chaotic, trying to differentiate the characters and povs. I don't know when sean is speaking or when authur or Emma is speaking. I hope the author make out time to make their characters more understandable. Other than that, I think I like emma's character. She's a strong character. And there storyline is nice. Good job author.