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Yeah, it's Old Norse for bear
If this is not given more chapters, I will be very sad :( Even though I don't know much about the SCP-universe, the premise is incredibly promising, and it wouldn't do this crossover justice to leave it with only 1 or 2 chapters (even though it was meant to be a one-shot). I hope the author would be willing to continue this! 4.8 stars from me with how the story is going so far.
I don't care what anyone says, this is gold. I have never found a Breaking Bad fanfiction that I actually liked, but this is so fucking good. I would recommend this 10/10 times with how the story is so far. PS: If some of you guys could recommend some good Breaking Bad fanfictions, then I'd be stoked.
3 chapters in, and I already want more. Although the chapters are short, and I would love to have longer chapters, they are well-written nonetheless. There isn't much to say about the story yet, since it's so early on, but I will post another review whenever there are enough chapters and I have the motivation. It's going in the right direction so far.
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You too author! I would be ecstatic if you continued to update this fanfic. I have really enjoyed it so far! [img=recommend]
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the currently 14 available chapters. The writing quality is top-notch, and the story hooked me. The only complaint I would have was the frequency of uploads. However, this fanfic's chapters are much, much longer compared to the average fanfic on Webnovel. Overall, I'll be waiting in intrigue for more chapters. Good job author! :)
First of all, I am absolutely in love with this. It's sad to see that it has not gathered more attention since this is honestly a masterpiece. The grammar is fantastic, the world-building is really good too, and the interactions between the characters are phenomenal. Not to forget, this is also yuri...which I do enjoy quite a bit. The only problem I have with this story is that 'only' one chapter is released per day. Wish it was more because I honestly can't get enough of this absolute banger.
The last time I posted a review on one of your stories was on Grandpa Universe...So hi 👋 😃 Anyway, here's my rating for the first 28 chapters so far (Coming from a Flower whose first language is not English, so don't hate on my grammar.): WQ: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ As always, it is top-notch. There are some exceptions to this, but in no way do they distract- or make the story unreadable. SoU: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 28 chapters in one day?! I'd give it 10/5...Bad jokes aside, based on the update schedule of MisterImmortal's previous stories, I can only assume this one will be the same. 1-2 chapters a day. SD: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ At the start, it was a bit rushed, but that is mostly because of a massive information dump happening in the early chapters to build Hector's background. After the first 4-6 chapters, it will slow down a bit. CD: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ As always, MisterImmortal manages to pull off a very likeable main character. Personally, I love when the MC is an old man/woman. I feel it adds a sort of mystery and uniqueness. Besides that, Hector has been shown to be absolutely ruthless to his enemies, but loving to those he views as family. (I am looking at you Moony...and Satan 😉) Furthermore, he uses his knowledge to his advantage, planning ahead for the future. WB: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It is marvel. What could go wrong? I know it is an AU, but that is exactly right up my alley. Concerning the changes Hector has made - I can only say that I enjoy them 😃. This is the first time I have seen a fanfiction with an MC being REALLY involved in politics. Usually, they just use their knowledge about the future to invest and become multi-billionaires and not much more. Furthermore, MisterImmortal has clearly (to the extent of my knowledge) done his research concerning WW2. Total score: 4.8 PS: Can't spoil much in the review. If you want to know what changes Hector has made and how it affects the MCU, please read it yourself. I promise you (most likely) won't regret it. Thanks for taking the time to read through my review/rant. I hope you have a nice day 😅.
A unique take on Overlord, one which I enjoy immensely. Furthermore, writing quality is top notch (at least I believe so), and it has a pretty regular update schedule. Story development is so far nice, and the character design is pretty good (I've always loved villain / evil MC's, which Ingram is). And well, world background is Overlord so that's already good. So far I'm really enjoying this fanfic, and I can only hope it's not going to be dropped. If you enjoy a selfish, thieving, evil MC, I'd 100% recommend this fanfic to you.
Sorry, it's just that the sentence confused me. I understand it now, but the amount of times 'skill' was used really put me off.
You forgot someone that has a love for explosions...
huh?
Wish you didn't take it down, cuz I thoroughly enjoyed it! Time to go on a hunt and find it again.