SilverPsycho

Pfft

I remembered finding this poetry book for the first time, and I just know it does speak the emotions I felt and needed at that time. A good book for those who likes sad narrations.

no promises... *yeets*

and so it shall be soon-

LOL

The part I like the most is the progressing additional information about the world background. The authorities, the continents these people rule, the trademarks of each groups. There are a couple of punctuation misplacement, but it the message is delivered clear enough. Keep it up.

It would have been nice if we can see clues of their personality through their introductory speeches. But oh well, it's just the beginning.

Here goes the female lead, probably

Nope, the maid has a key to her room.

The story progression is good. I hope there would be more variations in the length of paragraphs to balance the one-liners through out. There are many characters, so hopefully their individuality would stand out more in the future chapters. Overall, nice plot line.