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The mushrooms become a talking point in later chapters (around chapter 32 in my backlog) and rest assured it'll be explained by then, but yeah, it does sound like a plot hole early on haha.
Everything's happening so fast HELP
One of the best I've read in the site- and it fits my tastes too! I can picture the scenes vividly as if I was looking into an image, and the prose capture me into the story like a book really should. The pacing is wonderful, with a balance mix of descriptions, narrations, and dialogue. Overall it was a very good read. Keep at it!
It's a very good fiction. It stands out from the rest the website has to offer. The prose and style are very similar to that of a published book, which is good. The only thing keeping the story from its full potential would be the balance in showing vs telling a scene. The first two chapters are victims of this. Overall though, very great job! Keep at it!