PinnacleExistence
There's nothing better than play ball 🏀🏀 and play good, but for that you gotta work. Just keep working and it will come.
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PinnacleExistence5dcông bố- PinnacleExistence15dtrả lời Not_SkeleBlade
well, in my country the bs is actually the nurses and doctor.. lol
"Have you ever thought that your birth could take away many human jobs, and it will also be because of you that I might lose my job?" - PinnacleExistence26dbình luận
I just came to say, I thought this was about LeBron
Prologue - PinnacleExistence26dcông bố
sorry, author, but this story is too raw.. couldn't go through the first 10 chapters.. the author concentrates too much on the MC and his egoism and arrogance.. every 3 paragraphs mentioning the MC's age and how he built this and that.. there's no explanation to doing things, just doing for the heck of it or because the MC is a genius. I would recommend building the world better and creating meaning for MC's actions, giving depth to the scenarios and events..
- PinnacleExistence1mthtrả lời VXZD_ZD
unfortunately, not.. author used a translator, and back then it wasn't even good.. it's readable, but hard to read it continuously.. for me it was easier because I'm Brazilian and so I can understand some errors that come with Portuguese - English translation
"12 days just, not much I thought it would take much longer." - PinnacleExistence1mthtrả lời IMightBeGod
how old are you, then?
She was doing her best to hide her deep sense of unease. Oh my goodness! Dear Lord, please, help guide me in this difficult matter. I don't want my son to sin six times each and every day! But what are our other options?! I wish Suzanne were here; she always knows what to do. But these problems are so terribly embarrassing that I don't know if I can even tell her about it. Besides, I'm on the spot to make the call right now. I'm the parent here; I have to step up and make the tough choices. - PinnacleExistence1mthtrả lời Nachtregen
is it cheating, though? she would've broken up, and if didn't want her to, he could just not have cheated on her
Feelings - She wants you to make her forget about her boyfriend who was cheating on her. - PinnacleExistence1mthtrả lời Chibaku_Monster
was about to say lol
'Maybe if I can find a good numbing agent or ability, then I can do this more often...' Peter thought as he waved his hand and opened a portal to the Mirror Dimension. - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
Tony Percival Wulfric Brian Stark
For the good of the people, of course. - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
harem lovers are burning inside right now, this is their whole reason to exist 😂😂😂
Peter sighs as he looks down at his right hand and smiles wryly. - PinnacleExistence1mthtrả lời Ellis8261
I guess, if you consider cheating on your wife with a teammate's wife bad enough.. 😂😂😂😂
"I want him out," Tony declared firmly. - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
author, i think you are trying to pace yourself too much.. the chapters sometimes don't have meaning.. i get that it won't have everytime because you need to set up, but reprising events from real life will hardly get any excitement if Javi isn't majorly involved.. the rookie challenge was great because we saw the MC be active, but there's a few chapters where the story seems to go backwards instead.. i just ask to build on the storylines better, not just telling events..
Ch 58 All Star Weekend: Slam Dunk Contest - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
"Sign the contract, big boy, sign the conrtract"
"Good, sign the contracts." - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận"How big is it?"
- PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận"She is a powerful warrior. The issue is my size."
- PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
god dayummnn
"In that case, turn into a human form because you are ugly to look at." - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
one of the worst quotes of all time 😂😂
"If you kill a killer, the number of killers in the world remains the same." Bruce urged as he walked towards Selina and held her shoulder for support. - PinnacleExistence1mthbình luận
this is really true.. i was really happy, and then I wasn't, i broke up, and now I constantly think if my decisions were the right ones..
"If you love someone, he could make you sad. He could even make you feel lonely sometimes. But that someone can also make you happier than you'll ever be..." - PinnacleExistence1mthtrả lời Shadow_Dragon_9805'*Sigh* It looks like my love life is on its way to hell even before it begins.'