Review Detail of PinnacleExistence in Different Batman

sorry, author, but this story is too raw.. couldn't go through the first 10 chapters.. the author concentrates too much on the MC and his egoism and arrogance.. every 3 paragraphs mentioning the MC's age and how he built this and that.. there's no explanation to doing things, just doing for the heck of it or because the MC is a genius. I would recommend building the world better and creating meaning for MC's actions, giving depth to the scenarios and events..