yep, Idk why when I copy from doc to inkstone it got errors tho, tks for pointing out

I'm pretty sure I did the wording differently. He remembers most of the thing except the time with Makima after the contract.

I made this art some time ago. Here is the concept I'm going for.

Oof this image right here made me act unwise🗿

I didn't describe him for a reason. What hind behind that armor? Who know?

Nice. I really appreciate the review. Idk if the audience on this platform will like this or not seeing as my fanfic didn't get the attention most usually do.

Ty

Fk I didn't set up like 4 chapters ahead to let Makima somehow died to a bum like Naobito for nothing.

Maki didn't kill him. The thing that kill him was Makima's contract when she fought Naobito

Though I'd like you to be more specific to which part that seems forced.

Eh, just have fun with the fanfic. The fic wasn't about fighting anyway.

Pretty mid tbh, the first few times is ok but then it starts to fall off. I feel like the author tried too hard on giving readers a depressing mood but failed and just do paraphrasing times and times again. Feel like we go nowhere. But fk it, who care? I am die hard on my girl Fire Keeper.

I came here to find trash but instead I got depressed. The author himself is kinda ass and also his writing but welp he tried anyway. Am I hollowing?

got it chief

Don't worry, the future me will figure it out. Probably some make up incantations and spells after I trauma dump him.

Thanks, I threw in a bunch of random bs and hoped it somehow work lmao

Yup, you save her and she want to kill you now, tsk tsk. I only did it because I want a cool flammy head. MAY CHAOS TAKE OVER THE WORLD!