Daoist626662

bro some chapters are missing is it on purposs or what

hope you get better man thats rough

naruto is probably less determined so he wouldn't atract her, sakura said naruto is stupid and obnoxios because he didn't have any parents to teach him right and wrong

more like 8.33 if you use percentages

first of all, how did a sheep lead a lion army, no normal sheep can do it, and if the sheep is ordinary the moment a lion is hungry it would eat it, the lions then woul fight for the alpha spot, then it would be an army of lions led by a lion

you aint getting no 5 stars with that updating scedule. story good thought...................................................................

i meant early stage A.I

so i reread most of the chapters, there was alot of improvement, espetially with making some things clear, i don't know if this is intentianal but there are alot of times were things are vaige, and i hope it wouldn't be all answered with one big information dump as alot of stories with that problem become too boring as the answer wouldn't be as effective, some stories link it all with a short explenation that leads to another mystory, and the answer to it would solve the puzzle, and that would be a good way to go about it, but a unique way to lead the story forward would also be good, but for both ways to work the story has to be attractive all the way throught, another thing is that that when a mission is issued such as in the beginning of the story with the tutorials, it repeats alot of thing which makes it sound like an early state A.I , i don't know if its only in some chapters or if its intentional, i hope there is an exeplenation for it. note: thank you for the update and the fix, it helped alot

can you tell me how long it will take you

note: most advansed in the country not the world