drewcifer82

You were right. It is better. I will miss the NPC romance. However, it does feel better that he’s not crafting. I don’t know what you have planned for his sub class, but this emphasis on leadership and warrior skills feels more in tune with what a founder of an empire would be. His online novel not being a focus, and how he’s not ingratiating himself with the royal family is another thing I can agree with. Not only is it too soon for that anyway, but it just makes more sense for his status to cause strife and set him up for more trials to overcome.

Will do. Both were very well written and I was sad to see them go.

Ngl, I enjoyed the first draft. And then that got taken down. I enjoyed the second draft. Then that got taken down. I’ll keep reading, but so far it lacks what the other two had.

Read it in bursts and interrupt it with something light hearted and easy. It’s well done, but a bit heavy in my opinion, hence the advice. I’ve been reading it since the beginning, I haven’t caught up all the way yet because I’m taking my own advice. I just got to around chapter 155. I just can’t binge read it for longer than a few days before needing to read something stupid where the MC is OP and everything goes their way. 🤷🏽 what can ya do. Like I said though, this story is really well done. It just needs to be read in short bursts.

Gg

***Qing Tan

That makes sense. No matter the fact that she was saved, she still went through something traumatic, no way she can get over that short term.

Why do they have to develop godlike powers? They’re plenty awesome as they are. I’d rather see them think around their enemies rather than overpower them with a flick of their wrist.

Hmm.. do you mean viability? Like it’s able to be used by a very large number of people? Otherwise, how could it be popular if no one knows about it yet?

This is kinda stupid. I understand that it’s a translation and I can’t make any worthwhile inputs. However, the fact that nothing actually changes plot-wise in an overall sense completely negates any draw this story has and also shows that while the author has a decent head on his shoulders for developing Mark himself as a character as well as for making up awesome pseudo-science, he/she refuses to change relevant plot points in order to add unnecessary drama. Sure it’d be boring if a character came in and with a wave of his hand made everything all better, but there needs to be actual influence on the major plot points in order to be effectual. This is, of course, just my opinion and can be taken with a grain of salt. I just feel rather strongly about it.