Veno123

the author must have done an excellent job, its literally in the title that the players are annoying

You literally didn't read the first line.... You just saw the word "translated" and thought it was a translation .......

MAP...... keep the MC away from children...

Seems okay so far. A proofreader would definitely increase the rating, the writing is a bit rough. Cant say much about character or story development yet because it has just begun. Looking forward for the future of this fanfic. Keep up the good work author.

are you writing with the help of a translator? (sry)

+1

dont know abt patreon but i heard ko-fi is pretty much the same but u get bigger cut of the money if u want to lower the cost but keep profit roughly the same

You could try to make a new pokemon fanfic thats starts with this mc becoming champion or doing some cool battle to showcase his style and the new mc is watching the old mc and aspire to become the next champion or surpass the old mc in the same style.

Story seems okay so far but the grammar is lacking. Author quality would probably greatly increase if he had someone help him with his spellning mistakes.

Why give a review if you haven't even read the novel. It's like looking at food and judging it based in looks.