yay.. the snake pedo ruins all his plans

well he did but I'm pretty sure the bus killed him since he hasn't written anything since

hahaha dbz abridged goku ( nice work brain)

giving off some nurarihyon vibes there lol

yeah I never understood that they never went there. he should check it out sense he knows about the hyperbolic time chamber

I see her more like the abridged version who hit on gohan

no offense to you author but I think you made a huge mistake on this new version ... the Ban in this version is way to similar to Stephen salvatore in personality. your orginal version aligned more with Ban as stron,fun and playful. I'm going to pass on this new version and check up occasionally to see if you decide to go back to the orginal version...who's personality was similar to the real Ban

preferred the original...

hahaha FACTS!

what do you mean gender? Frieza is a freaky alien genotype and his badass brother is none other than Pump Daddy C

really? I might need to reread it then because I dont remember that at all. just about the one he slipped in his pocket

am I the only one who would accept his position as kami

umm you might want to edit your earlier chapter then bc training on the lookout he said he used it

I love it. abridged was kinda better then the og in some parts. atleast it's not like sword art online and was completely better than the original

please no time travelers

same...it was like I was rick rolled

so yeah I feel like I've been misled. .. I was under the impression it was perfect cell from the DAU or hell even dbz abridged