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Life's greatest illusion is Innocence.
I'm using Yen not Valis as shown in the show. It just makes the conversion easier as I can just google values.
Jman is in my opinion one of if not the best author on this site. His stories aren't for everyone, and I shy away from them at times when I'm in the mood for a more wholesome and not 'r-pe, pillage, conquer' vibe. I'm giving this a good review of 4.8 stars. Jman's writing quality is good. His updates are always consistent and I can rest assured that if I look away for a few weeks to a month or two, I can expect a decent load of chapters for me to bing. His story often develops in predictable and often tiresome paths, reminding me of Chinese Xiaoxia novels. If in Xiaoxia novels its 'third realm ping-pong jumps to first realm ding-dong, then first realm ding-dong to third realm ching-chong', Jman's stories are 'I got this p-ssy, but then got another better p-ssy. Also, look at this new gun. Also, look at this new p-ssy. Also, look at this new body that I designed in my lab.' Like I said, 'r-pe, pillage, conquer' is a Jman brand, and it can get annoying at times when wholesome interactions are desired, rather than the 'p-ssy-slayer 9000' modus operandi that his MCs often hold. This doesn't exactly detract from his story development score, as you don't order pizza when you don't feel like ordering pizza. In this case, I don't read Jman when I don't want to read Jman stories. Now, for this story inparticular, I've taken off a star in Character Design. This is where my personal bias comes in and I just flat out admit to not liking Mormont, nor the often repetitive 'bulking behemoth at age 13' view slotted into this story. I face faulted when I read that a child was already taller than most men, especially men in Westeros who should be around 5' 5'' at the tallest for small-folk and six foot at the largest for 'well-fed' nobles. Sure, he's a northerner, but it just rubs me the wrong way that he just 'obtained' his body without any actual visible trials seen my the readers and one not possible by preview of the genetic lottery. There was some asinine explanation of hormones doing it, but it just drags on a man's psyche. For world building, its GOT or ASOIF, so I can't give a lower review than 5. Anyway, 4.8 stars, cool novel, I was hoping for the Overlord novel tho'.
This made me cackle.
Technically a fan of the Ink Spots, but same difference I guess as JT used those lyrics in their rap. Not that I'm not a JT fan, but the inspiration was from the OG.
Writing Quality: I'd say I'm a good writer, so I'll give myself five stars. :) Stability of Updates: Uhhhh.... I'd say one, but that really hurts my ratings, so I'll put it to a three as I often write around 10k words in a single sitting and start posting all of that in a single night before going dark for several weeks to a month. Story Development: I have...an idea. The goal is RWBY, the plan is simple; there is no plan. Four-ish stars. Character Design: Ivan's a cool dude to develop with his 'history' I invent at the slightest whim. I feel like I can do the stern military thing with Ult and Alt's gonna be the loose cannon murder machine (maybe like Revy from black lagoon? Eh, WIP.). 5 stars due to the cool art I post in the paragraph comments. World Background: Fallout's really cool, I feel like I'm doing something cool with being in New York, and while I won't be doing a deep dive into the Patriots like we can do with the Brother Hood of Steel in-game, they're more the baddies we'll be battling in the future. Remnant in the future is gonna be interesting to say the least and might be where this fic burns and dies like the ashes of the Old World though.
Cough, Cough, I'ma just 'borrow' all this, okay JMan?
I was looking up how many intelligent glowing ones there are, and found that two cannon ones in the games, Jason Bright and that Oswald guy up in Nuka-World. Other games also had them, but they were more knock off fallout games, so I'm not really sure if I should count them. Still, Int Focused Glowing Ones = Very Rare.