RavenAdz

It was impressively good until this chapter published that you let Morgan ate a devil fruit, kinda disappointed, you could have find anyways to heal him back, but resorting to rely on devil fruit. I was loving this fanfic cause the MC is relying on haki and martial arts only, not many author write it. Give you a suggestion, can you make an alternative of this fanfic? This are my thoughts author. Disappointing but great chapter.

double ye

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Thanks for the chapter.About Uta, I really think she wouldn't fit in the straw hat crew, for starters Brooks has already has a role in the crew as a Musician, swordsman, and devil fruit user, so that's just it. However, there's always a possibility.Of course, these are just my thoughts. You author will be the one to decide it.Just keep on going am loving it.❤️❤️

Thanks for the Chapter ❤️👍

Approved 👍👍❤️

I like the starting point of the story. I hope this will be updated daily as I really enjoyed the story for like Chapters and its's good. And I hope this story is all action, like martial arts as I really anticipated this kind of story of Luffy learning martial arts. I support you Author for this story I hope you maintain this story until the current events of the story❤️❤️❤️❤️😊😊😊......By the way I no harem please🥺🥺🥺

Thank you for the chapter❤️I hope you could post more of it😊😊

Thanks for the chapter ❤️