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that he got no levels in 2 years fighting and all is a bit BS. he got 2 lvl fighting/killing Kho with a 30lvl diff between them
the Name, DUDE THE NAME, name the little shit Fluffy for i care but Acno sounds more like a Fantasy world than a Name for a living beeing..
a Mount would have beend SO much better like a Fenrir or so, or Making Tobi at least his Teacher
that you need to write his full name every single fucking time is crazy
This Will be big Shoes to fill, the Original was and is Awesome. Fights and Tactics later in OG are top Notch. hope you dont just repost until ch. 380 for a Year and cash grab the fools joining Patreon until there is ACTUAL new content.
with the ice its a trash idea becase the ice hold Hundres of Riders with Horses but Collapse on a few hundred more? How do you calculate that. 100 Riders with horses is at least 80t of Weight to hold that alone the ice needed to be several Meters thick and i doubt the lake is even that deep to beginn with . then the BS about them cracking the ice... More belive able would have been they melted a Line with Fire into the Lake and Jons Forces jump over it
not cool, Sansa would be a better queen and more fitting.
the random words here and there are utter trash. Chinese humor is cringe af 5year olds reading porn RIGHT. as a Translater you should be ashamed about yourself beeing a Lazy bum. in 12 chapters there are like 8 Different Names for the mc .
can you try fixing his Name at least to keep it consistent? Lazy people doing shoddy work and then ask for money on Patreon...