Daiost_Chan

This is a translation using AI, as far as I can tell that's it. No, cleaning the story up, no real grammar checks etc. The potential of an amazing story is there but between the OG writing and the AI, the story suffers greatly. Gave it to chapter 78 and had to drop it. Can't stand dumb to smart to dumb MCs Mc is not really OP when he should be and its OP when he shouldn't be. His decisions might as well be dice rolls that only work out do to plot armor. The worldbuilding aint much, at best its descriptive but heavily dependent on you having some LoL/Arcane knowledge to make the best of few bits thrown here and there. The writing goes from 1st grade level to 4th grade in between sentences. Its a shame cause there really is a great story potential here. Cant say if the story is great on its original language and the AI mess it up or its only a potentially good story that just bad.

I have been reading this story on fanfiction. The only flaw it has is the lack of updates, but other than that its a good read . Was left wanting more chapters. 4 stars

And another falls to the void... out of my library.

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Thanks for the chapter.

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Thanks.

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Thanks for the chapter.

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