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yes but it could probably be even better than a kryptonian. instead of having to absorb solar energy, he could generate it like a star, maybe removing limits like physical/mental energy also.
dont, no point in doing it. just make it seem like gods protection of his past memories also protects random thoughts about the past from her so he can relax. and he should "forget" about the past move on and truly start living in this new world, thats a better way to bond with saphira than speaking about stuff that will create pointless drama in the story
dont so it
well he knows about the tesseract aka space cube. but i dont think he ever knew there was a stone inside it. or that others like it exist till way later in the avengers movies.
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just spread rumors of konoha planning to get rid of the uchiha and kill danzo
no
Just keep it only 1 love interest, idk why you would want to go for 2...either go harem or not
Well in the few chapters there isnt much for me to review, But I enjoyed reading it so far. I hope you can do more for the world building, explain the difference, if there are no same actors, movies, shows, even songs and Singers he could be doing much more. Sell songs, and a few scripts. Copy popular books etc. Of course not too much to seem like youre stealing shit or pulling it from no where. Just Keep the best for yourself, if you're not going the director route you can throw them to mcs dad and act in some you prefer. Show more of his acting and how he improves as an actor. Maybe others reactions to him and his movies etc. Otherwise just Keep throwing out more chapters and im going to love it either way :)
Isnt the Phoenix avatar supposed to burn planets with Phoenix flames so they get reborn from the ashes kind of thing and not literally destroy them? I thought he would Use the flames he stole from Phoenix or something not this,oh well fk it xD