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Basically, this and the previous could be written as one chapter. there is a little bit of story progression but a lot of repetitive explanations. We get that word, and chapter counts are important. But rather than rephrasing and repeating, try to make them chapters more weighty. Mech touch is a great example. Half of the chapter is irrelevant, but reading them won't make us feel like we are bored or wasting coins and time. Of course, take your time writing and come up with more exciting plots . All we fans of this book want is to read it without getting bored and exhausted.
what the heck does counting seconds mean. I can understand what you are trying to imply, but at least keep these simple. At some point, it just hinders the reading experience.