DereBeyi
Hello, my name is DereBeyi. I'm a writer of a fan-fiction novel on webnovel. If my grammar is bad an apology because English is not my main language
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First of all, I must say that Fishman karate and Fishman jujutsu are different things. Anyone can use Fishman karate, but a human using Fishman jujutsu has never been seen.
Yes, that's true. 41 words less than the previous chapter. I can't believe you can understand that.
No, I don't plan to turn to a multiverse. I think to finish the story after destroying the Otsutsuki clan. Maybe after I've written a few more different novels I can write a multiverse novel. The next story I'm going to write will only take place in the Naruto universe for now. A lot of things will be different from anime in my new story, unlike this story.
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thx good idea
Karakterlerin derinliği konusuna katılıyorum, onun sebebi yazarlık konusunda çok deneyimsiz olmam. Karakter konusunu ileride biraz da olsun iyileştirmeye çalıştım, ama temel iyi olmadığı için o kadar da etkili olmadı. Şimdi kendimi daha iyi yeni hikaye yazmak için hazır hissediyorum. Fakat tabii ki de önce bu hikayeyi bitirmek istiyorum. Tahminen 1 ay içinde bu hikayeyi bitirmiş ve yeni hikayeyi yazmaya başlamış olurum. Eleştirilerin için teşekkürler. (Açıkçası, türk birisinin hikayemi okuması beni biraz utandırıyor :d)
Dude, you keep asking every day. R18 chapters will only be on patreon. The reason I do it is to make money. Frankly, this makes more sense since there will not be many r18 chapters in this story. But the other story that I will write will be more r18 chapters, so only some specials r18 chapters will be exclusive to the patreon. Whatever you write, my opinion will not change.
Danzo was also quite powerful in Hiruzen's time. After Hiruzen, Tsunade was quickly recruited and I honestly don't think she's very good as a kage. She hasn't been in Konoha for many years, so she may not have a good relationship with the people in village, and so I think Danzo is more competent at some points in the village than her. If Tsunade openly opposes him, a civil war will most likely break out, which could be pretty bad for her. After all, Danzo is someone who manipulates people quite well.