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SAVAGE! yeah just push inferiority complex girl even further with savage words. next time use 'silly girl' instead
too many things broke the immersion of reading this
this woman is such a tease
thats rather dunb reason placnig to d. but fanfic is always flawed so ig its fine
this guy keep changing gender
this dude makes reason too much. not everything is in need of reason explanation. its too long winded dude
kaijuu battle lesgoo
its funny that the author explaining the skill by giving comparison of naruto skill. they dont understand that the one reading type moon fanfic is fan who more familiar to type moon lore than naruto. i dont even understand that there is such skill exist lol
tbh this mc is a lot more fitting as incubus instead of angel
with that level of power in possession, how do you write and enjoyable enemy worthy of thst power? all good story revolve around good protagonist and antagonists. if this powerful mc end up author writing a new fic villain just so to content with this level power, it will be boring because it is no more than a new fic borrowing overlord world.