A great story idea that is plagued by bad grammar and editing. You have sentences where words are combined together with no spaces, and there is no " " for characters speaking. You need to go back and edit chapters that have this issue. The story is good but has so many errors that it's almost unreadable. Advice from a fellow author: Get Grammarly or an app like it to fix your grammatical errors.

I'm writing a bad review because he never finished the story! I bought the Patreon to see the end, and it never finished! It's been months, and he moved on to his other stories with no conclusion to this one. At least tell your readers you're done with it. The story was a 4/5 before that.

Anthem videogame combination of all the armors into one

Sorry Everyone. I've been slammed with work, school, and things in my personal life. No chapter this week will update soon thank you for your patience. I will make up with a double chapter when I'm back.

As a fellow fanfic writer, let me tell you this story is fantastic. The writer is really good at world-building each individual world. While also making the multiverse aspect of the story easy to understand. I also so far have loved the MC's character development. I'm 25 chapters in and loving the story!