A great story idea that is plagued by bad grammar and editing. You have sentences where words are combined together with no spaces, and there is no " " for characters speaking. You need to go back and edit chapters that have this issue. The story is good but has so many errors that it's almost unreadable. Advice from a fellow author: Get Grammarly or an app like it to fix your grammatical errors.
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