deadimp

you know these cliffhangers are starting to kill me. having to wait for the mext chapter. it makes it feel like torture

I must say I got super excited the moment I saw a new chapter for this and couldn't wait to read it. I can't wait for more chapters, and just got to say every chapter released just gets better as they go. thanks for the new chapter. hopefully, more inspiration hits you soon

you know, it's torture waiting for the next chapter when they end like the last 2.

this was going so great, then you make Harry stupid again, and now everything goes back to how it was, what was the point of everything till now. i hope it doesn't end like this. I can't wait for more chapters, hopefully

would love to read more. great so far keepsmyou riveted to the story

great story so far cant wait for more chapters. the story is great, and the background makes it more enjoyable, and i like that it is not rushed to get to the main story. i like how he is unique, not a wearwolf or vampire

the story was going well until the part where he died , and it just became terrible. The time with freya and Dahlia wasn't great, but it was understandable, but the Rebecca part after just destroyed the story for me. i saw no reason of having it there if nothing was going to change except make the mc arrogant and stupid. to the writer, good luck. i know everyone has different tastes. im sure you will have people who will enjoy it.

Rebecca

thanks for the chapter can't wait for more.

great story cant wait for more chapters really enjoying how the mc has to work for his desires not just given them. thanks for writing this fan fiction