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Juja

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2017-05-21 đã tham giaUnited States
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  • Jujaa month ago
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    Finally finished volume 1 and now can type out a decent review. I’ll state first this is definitely subjective and may not feel that way for everyone who reads this work. Definitely has been consistent in its release even had quite a few, “Large,” chapter dumps. Built on the basis of Greek mythology which though it gave a great start had to be finagled around to not seem like, “Main character too op please nerf,” saw a steady though at times repetitive growth of MC. Character design fit so well with how a human from after the AoG is significantly weaker though that doesn’t necessarily mean they can’t still think outside the box for which we have a well designed MC who the story is about though doesn’t just use face slapping the side characters around to control others. I love the grudge book and can’t wait for it to be a NP along with his other skills. World background the author uses many epics and myths from Ancient Greek and strays as little as he can to line everything up and he ended the Ancient Greek at the perfect climax. Would I suggest this to others? Easily, though I would warn them that readers don’t need to feel bogged down by a slow section it picks back up soon. I will definitely be rereading this after volume 2 takes off and probably as a refresher eventually but I’ll still feel it worth it. And I’ll leave this here and hope for more in the future. Great job writing this, Juja

  • Juja4 years ago
     công bố

    This is a phenomenon of a Star Wars fanfic. The only reason I haven’t just 5 starred everything is that the author has a habit of over describing some items in multiple locations that it would break the immersion. I am not saying describing every deadly thing a ship/droid/power suit is not amazing it is just that the lists blur together as a block of info. I don’t have the English writing background to be able to say of a better way but maybe change it from a straight list to something similar to a tour of the ship with some dialogue in between. Now the rest that I gave 5 stars don’t need more explanation I enjoy them immensely so onto my last tick/the only other 4 star is the fact of what the mc is to the force now I know it’s not fully explained even with legends lore but I don’t see it as impenetrable to the force more like the vong and being undetectable to it. Again keep up the great story telling and I hope this “criticism” isn’t unwanted or I will feel like a douche nozzle. GREAT STORY WOULD RECOMMEND FOR STAR WARS FANS!