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WHITE FEELINGS, BLACK HEART

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Đọc tiểu thuyết WHITE FEELINGS, BLACK HEART của tác giả Ninestar619 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.In the Land named Lender, there existed creatures that no one has ever heard about. Have you ever heard of creatures from one of its kind?One among the myths beings who are said to be the strongest o...

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In the Land named Lender, there existed creatures that no one has ever heard about. Have you ever heard of creatures from one of its kind? One among the myths beings who are said to be the strongest of all? Who lives behind the shadows of humans, who are called the strongest from one side while the others called them immortal? They are not fairies, Vampires, Goblins, or Werewolves however something beyond them. They are called DeathLocks. It is a rare rumor about them that they are powerful and strong after being gifted with a natural mysterious source called a system. The system works well with them as it provides them necessary requirement from above what a normal human being struggled to earn. With this, they wage wars over numerous Kingdoms and conquered lands according to their own will. No one can stop them or battle against them. On the other hand, a common fact about their system is known that Human beings can’t see their system as for this the Deathlocks feel proud for it. However, everything slowly collapses when a young boy from the humans named Yutosai soon discovers a chained Deathlock who is trapped between survival for life and with the darkness of death. What’s worse both are quite close to each other. To turn the matter upside down, this Deathlock chooses Yutosai to be his slave in exchange for his freedom by providing him THREE systems at a time, with all different statuses and power which soon takes his life from the poor of slavery till meeting up with mighty kings. How does Yutosai’s life changes into a world where he sees mystery behind lands, finds cries behind voices, seeks evil behind the white, visits strong Kings and salutes Empires, met dark villains, and feels peaceful auras trapped around his land? With the blood of a slave running in his veins, find out his long journey around the land and how will he manage to finish the main quest line with one sentence to be solved as an order by his master: WHITE FEELINGS, BLACK HEART.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

I can say this is a masterpiece. 😉 I saw that the writings of the author were clean and fluent. Plus the world-building and creativity of the power system were lit! Good luck in the future! I must say you have potential! [img=recommend]

zingertje_123
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Great book. I like to raed more of you. Good luck and keep up the good work.

Oliver_Twist_4607
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Wow, I'd really like to read it a little bit more from the main character.

sleepingpeacefully
sleepingpeacefullyLv3sleepingpeacefully

Good novel , everything thing is great about his novel whether is writing or the story, keep it up author.

UelUel
UelUelLv4UelUel

It's another book from a great author, so I can say and recommend that this book is also as great as his other books.

Timmytamtams
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The synopsis was really detailed and informative, it made me want to read more and when I did I was not let down! I really enjoyed the few chapters I have read so far, cannot wait to read on further. Good job author! <3

pedro_corti
pedro_cortiLv1pedro_corti

The book cover and the title caught my attention, reading the first chapter made me want more. please keep updatin. can't wait to read more.

Sir_WendoS
Sir_WendoSLv4Sir_WendoS

It's not bad honestly. The only lacking thing is the writing quality... So, keep up the imagination author, and keep on writing! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LucienNg
LucienNgLv1LucienNg

I’ll do an honest review. The story itself isnt too bad; the plot has a lot of potential, actually. The pacing was well-thought too. However, there are grammatical as well as structural mistakes here and there. The idea of the story itself is unique, but a quick re-run on what you’ve written once in a while could really help! Overall, I understand that this is a new story that needs furthur editing and fixing, so I’ll give it a 4 for the idea. I believe your story has the potential to get out there, so don’t give up and keep writing author!

Rayne_Rue
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Would say this novel is amazing and yes there are a few mistakes and they can be fixed, I really loved the chapters I was reading so far and they were quite catchy, keep writing be the best good job for finding time to write this down.

iam_adh
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It's a little rough around the edges. Some of the sentences are difficult to understand and the story seems a bit fast paced. However, I can see the potential the story had it just needs more carving done. Keep up the good work author!

Oliver_Twist_4607
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If you're a huge mythical fan then I highly recommend this book.

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