The Tale of The Newly Born Rebel

although the start was not what I hoped for but it intrigued me later on. The story is paced in at a good length and not much complaints. overall a good book!

What you got here is a good story. the characters are amazing, the story is also well done and the style of writing was easy to flow through. The world building, I would say it somewhat builds progressively but there are detailed descriptions. And the Action kept me engaged to the story. Although this is good, in the beginning there is a few running on sentences. You would want to add a full stop to not have those sentences go on like that. This is the only problem iv'e noticed as everything else seemed on point. The Author does improve in later chapters though so I would still give it to them. I'll say this was still a worthwhile read.

The plot itself is interesting, and the way it's delivered is great as well. It just needs to be edited more and refined. This is just an opinion of mine but the paragraphs are too long and it gives me a headache. Other than that I'm really interested.

I'm pretty confident about my story my characters also I'm also a little descriptive which can be good and bad that being said my only problem is my updating stability but I'll try to work on it. So hope you enjoy this book