THE FIRST TIME

when my family and I go to the jungle to camping.I hear something weird at there like a snake but slow and it similar like human voice.I don't think to much about it so I don't tell that thing to my Family 👪.when we find a good place to camping me and my brother set up our tent but something make me feel wierd because I smell some thing like gas but we just use a electric lamp because we just stay one night at here.After we set up out tent me and my family telling scary story about a old urban about a lost soul.That story are so scary soo I and my brother sleep fast at the tent.but something me me feel so cold and scary😨😨

Writer:Adam harith:13 year old

this is my first time write a story so please tell me what wrong about my story🙏🙏🙏