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The Battles of Hearts (Naruto)

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Đọc tiểu thuyết The Battles of Hearts (Naruto) của tác giả The_Mystry được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted,...

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Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted, this is the story of Naruto the Military Commando. In my story, his son, Aqua Hoshino, differs from the original Oshi No Ko character. I wasn't fond of how Aqua toyed with Akane and Kana's hearts, so I created him to be the son that Naruto truly deserves. I hope you enjoy my narrative.

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ENEMIGOS FRENTE EL ALTAR

Ella siempre supo que la odiaba, Sus miradas, Sus gestos, Sus afiladas palabras, Jamás ocultaron su odio y desprecio hacia ella, Pero Sofía jamás imagino tal humillación. Jamás por su mente pasó, Qué la dejara frente el altar, Y nada más y nada menos, Que por su hermana, Robert Miller no estaba dispuesto a romper una promesa ! Ni su palabra. Eso no estaba en juego, El había prometido a ese hombre que le salvó la vida , Qué el siempre la protegeria. Pero jamas penso que algo asi pasaria. La boda seguía en pie, Solamente qué el novio ya no era Anthony Miller , Si no Lucas , El nieto mayor de los Miller. Sofía no conocías Luca, solo escuchaba rumores como todo el mundo, El hombre era callado, poco sociable, y despiadado con sus enemigos, Imaginarse un hombre como él como esposo, Le hizo temblar las piernas, Y recordar en esos hermosos ojos azules . Pero no, Ella no se derrumbaría antes los ojos de los invitados , Suficiente humillación tenía , Con que el la dejar plantada, vestida de novia frente a Dios, Y esa gente. Ahora qué pasaría con su vida al lado de un hombre que no conocía . Al lado de un hombre que no sabía, si la odiaba más que su hermano menor , Porque tenía que aguantar tantas humillaciones, Tanto desprecio, tanta maldad , Porque su padre no la defendía , Eso ella no lo entendía , Pero con él sí acepto, cambiaría su vida por completo. Descubrir su pasado y linaje, Fue demasiado para alguien como ella . Pero sobretodo la reaccion de Liam , Era algo que no esperaba, Por que hasta ahora su primer amor demostraba interes, O acaso era obsecion y no amor, La llegada de su abuelo, Y descubrir su verdadero linaje, Trairia a un hombre que la aria soñar con probar esos labios, En olvidar a su primer amor , y alejarse de ese matrimonio, Su pasado era oscuro, pero su presente , No se miraba mejor, Que deparaba el futuro no lo sabia, Pero le emocionaba descubrirlo, Junto a las personas que la amaban, Emily , Timothy , Que pasara en su futuro. Jacob Arthur winxor Archiduque del reyno de winminhort, Basto una mirada para saber que Sofia era el amor de alma gemela. Y de alo estaba seguro no la dejaria ir de su vida. que pasara ahora, con una confundida Sofia spencer, que eligira su amor de juventud , O este imponente hombre de aspecto rudo, mayor que ella. Pero que no podia negar le atraia de una forma que ni ella sabia era capas de desear, mas con ese beso que le nublo la mente y la hizo desear mas. que pasara en esta intrigante historia descubrelo, habra venganza a una hermana traicionera ¿ a un engaño inperdonable. a un doloroso amor.

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the author asked for feedback on what I read and I can say that it was written quite well, since I’ve been reading short stories or ff I’ve already stopped paying attention to grammar, it’s not so important if you’re a new writer, because the most important thing is the plot, here the plot is not bad, but unfortunately for me it is at the level of drama of Chinese short stories, as usual, everyone turned their backs on the main character and abandoned everyone and he decided to return to his former life and again become a withdrawn idiot so that in the end he would get a happy ending, I don’t I say that this is bad, this is the usual cliche with all the things that have to happen, plus the combination of incompatible plot and characters is not bad at all, and it is clear that the author wanted to correctly convey the very essence of the characters and their feelings about their loved ones and how they want to be close to them, but for me it’s not like I could read and wait for continuation, I read everything that was there and because I was drunk and I was bored, and yet I’m here and sharing my opinion, still in the same state, and yet I I believe that there will be people who will like it and they will decide to support the author in his endeavors, and I also wish the author good luck, peace:з

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