Revision

A/N: this is my first novel, and GOD i'll need do some revising on it! mainly the fateverse's plot as i understend squat of it! i've seen fate stay night UBW and fate zero, but then there is all the rest that i understand the squat off!

Fate verse will HAVE to be an AU. cause i realy can't write it if i don't cut 80% of its corners!

I also have to figure out what to do about the info dumps i wrote, as without them, you guys won't understand what is going on, but with them it is even worse!

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for changes i am considering (emphasis on CONSIDERING):

1 start somewhere else

2remove mc's foreknowlage

3limit his powers to a set like a hotbar. like, instead of the full control over his biology that even allowed him to instal a godam phone on his godam brain, he can only change into people, form claws, and the other stuff WE as player can make the caracter do in the game, he will have mental buttons to press to use his powers, a PS controler and a keybord&mouse to be more precise

4butcher fateverse

5NOT give him a cephalon and railjack

6remove his ability to void souls (don't wory, bad guys will go to hell regardless)

7remove achivements(that one was in just for comedy anyway)

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the novel is oficialy paused, and maybe will be entirely rebooted

i'll post the half writen chapters i had made for the second arc

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good day to all, and i'll leave you with a picture of one of the reasons i say fateverse makes no sense