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Skyward Over God

Tác giả: Daoist_Over_God
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Millions of years in our future, a prominent scientist is killed in one of his own experiments. Reincarnated in a higher plane of existence the Hero Fei Lei goes on a journey of Magic and Cultivation and is dragged into countless dangerous journeys throughout the world of Edan.

Chapter 1Prologue

Millions of years in our reality's future, in a large lab room, a single man stood in front of a large gate-like mechanical object in the shape of a ring. The gateway was radiating massive amounts of dimensional energy that flowed like mist from a spring. Suddenly, the device shook as it began generating a strange screen of blinding grey and white light began to form.

That man wore a white lab coat and had the looks of someone in their twenties, although he could be considered handsome he wasn't what one would call a lady killer. He stood still at the front of this gateway laughing maniacally.

"IT WORKS, IT ACTUALLY WORKS." The man shouted throwing his hands into the air.

The man raved constantly of his great success, jumping up and down throwing his fists in the air and wishing someone else was there with him to witness the brilliance of this occasion. Unfortunately, he made everyone leave his lab today, especially for their safety.

"A through Z, commence full spectrum analysis, the rest prepare a faux clone to test the gate's stability," As the man spoke, twenty-four smooth multicolored spherical orbs flew out of his body and began speaking as they did.

"Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Delta, Epsilon, Zeta, commencing full spectrum analysis total wait time one hour. Eta, Theta, Iota, Kappa, Lambda, Mu, Nu, Xi, Omicron, Pi, Rho, Sigma, Toa, Upsilon, Phi, Chi, Psi, Omega, beginning marrow and organ development, faux clone creation at 2% estimated wait time eight and a half hours."

"Now all that's left is to wait." Just as the words left the mouth of the young-looking scientist, a strange shadow appeared from another side of the portal. The 24 A.I's all began to fire off warning sounds.

"!!!Warning!!! !!!Warning!!! !!!Warning!!! " His A.I's began to blare like sirens.

"Species of unknown origins attempting to puncture the spatial variables, recommend that host immediately terminate experiment, commencing emergency shutdown of the interdimensional gateway," The A.I warned.

The strange shadow's image was slowly coming into focus, as it came closer it became apparent that it was humanoid in shape as it began to lift its arm and placed its hand against the curtain of energy.

Space began to distort as the scientist's lab began to quake and warp with it, several pieces of the lab's electronic equipment began short circuit and explode sending sparks and shrapnel across the lab room.

"Loss of primary and auxiliary power sources confirmed. Emergency Shutdown failed. Structural stability of lab 211 compromised."

"Commence fail-safe operation 'Eject.' Damn I guess this the end." The man sighed

The 24 Ai's began to emit a large amount of energy as groves in its steel-like surface began to glow in a highly advanced circuit-like pattern.

"Jettisoning lab into void space, final chance to revoke current objective."

"Proceed." The young-looking man said just before he heard a large echo of metal tearing apart everything around him. The man sighed one last time as his body was savagely torn in microparticles and spread across the chaotic space that is the void realm.. . .

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/Power On/....../Running Routine System Check/Source Code Intact/....../ Scanning New Environment/Accessing the Akashic Records/....../Activate Augmentation Procedure/....../Error!/Error!/Insufficient Energy/ Estimated Energy Required An Additional 1,000,000%. . .. . .. . .. . ./Altering Source Code/New Protocol/Began Merging All A.I/. . ./Protocol Mythos/New Source Code Completed/. . . /Protocol Exitus/New Source Code Completed/. . .. . ./Reactivating First Augmentation Procedure/. . ./Calculating Time Of Due Date/. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . /

/Estimated Time Of Completion/Eleven Months, Fourteen Days, and Nineteen Hours/

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/Augmentation Complete/ /Restoring Depleted Energy/ /Activating Hibernation Mode/. . ./Estimated Time Of Reactivation/. . .

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"Unknown."

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AsuraMonarch
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Overall great but with a few flaws writing quality- Again, I am a speed reader and i rarely spot grammar or spelling issues. But from what I've seen (and remember) it is pretty damn good. Stability- For someone writing about another successful fanfic the update rate is fantastic. Though i wish bleached multiverse comes back... story development- Good but somehow feels rushed. He went from greenhorn graduate to superhuman real quick. Don't make me mention the romance. Sure you are going to remedy it by making fillers but still. Character design- Well while the MC can be like a jack in the box. His main personality is his determination and drive. He has experienced getting a friend taken by him cause he was powerless. The feeling of being a 'commodity' so this drives him to become stronger. The scientist past life only makes it stronger. But Yan Mei is kinda shallow Crybaby tsundere when first introduced. Naive thinker (the one with children begging) aside from that her personality isn't set in stone. Hina on the other hand her recent story with the nobles feels like it is her way of coping to be joking and all. But it doesn't explain why when that one guy touched her she literally sliced the guy's hand off. I know she's only been in for a few chaps so I'm gonna cut you some slack. Her reason for being in love with MC is clear too it must've felt like herself back then wanting to become stronger but her maybe for revenge but MC to protect himself and his family (pure speculation) World Background- Pretty damn good. I ain't gonna lie but i rarely fully read world building chapters or just skim through it. So I'm not a good judge. Btw. I feel like you are an author that sneakily establishes the OPness not just bestows it all at once.

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