Note: i will start using {} for mind talk and this [] for skills. I got advise from the comments and should help alot.
Gin: {Hmm i guess you were wondering what i have been doing the last 5 years, well i been training.... sort of, more like crawling a LOT too increase my agi and vit in both my forms and i will start training soon oh and here are my status for now.}
"Status"
"Human"
[Str:2] +1
[Int:17] =0
[Agi:5] +1
[Vit:6] +1
[Magic:1] =0
[Aura:?]
[Semblence:?]
"Fanus"
[Str:6] =0
[Int:17] =0
[Agi:8] +1
[Vit:3] +1
[Magic:1] =0
[Aura:?]
[Semblence:?]
Gin:{Hmm i think its not that good of a stat, but my ability havn't changed huh... oh well i will learn more in time!.}
Roger: Gin it's time for your training are you prepared!!
Gin: Ahh yes grandpa!! {This is my first day of training, i hope it's goes well.}
Roger: Ah Gin hows my little black dot doing!
Gin: Grandpa! What are you gonna teach me? How to fight?, make weapons? Oh i cant wait!!
Roger: Hahaha!! Eager aren't you, well first here, i got a gift for you in your training.
Roger hands Gin a "Wooden Black Toy Sword"
Gin:Ohh!! thanks grandp... ugh it's heavy grandpa!
Roger: Of course its heavy Gin i forged this toy sword for your training, to build your strength and durability.
Gin:{No joke!! its hard to even hold it hmm System please use [Scan:Toy Sword].
System: Of course Gin.
["Blk Toy Sword"]
[A toy sword made from the hardest and heavy's wood around Remnant]
[Str + 5]
[Weight so far 0.3 Kg + Change depends on Str, Max 20Kg]
Gin:{So it depends on my effort then hmm lets see what i can use this for.}
Roger: Okey Gin! you will swing that sword 20 times! then take 5 min rest and then we repeat untill i say you are done!!
Gin: Yes grandpa!! (Try to swing) "swosh" "swosh"
(After 2 Hours of swinging)
Gin: "Pust" hah hah Grandpa!! im tired, let me rest please!!
Roger: No!! Gin, you have to try harder! the next one will be the last one so stand up!
Gin: I will try "Haah hiiaahh".
Roger: Yes Gin! Just one more now, you can do it!!
Gin: HAAAAAHH!!! hah hah i... did.... it. (Are on the ground)
System: {Point increase in Str and Wit +2 on each form and gained ability [Sage Strength].
Gin: {Oh...nice well i....will check...next time. Right now i... am too..... tired.} (And then sleeps)
Roger: {Incredible, he hold on to the very end?! even i can't do that when i was his age, i except a lot from you Gin....more then you relise.)
Roger: Alisha!! Gin passed out from training can you take him to bed!!
Alisha: WHAT!!! GRANDPA ROGER WHAT DID I TELL YOU, DONT EXHAUST HIM ON HIS FIRST DAY OF TRAINING!!!!
Roger: Ahh you did tell me that didn't you! im sorry, i got excited so i forgot hahaha!.....ahhh dont hit me!
Here’s a chapter hope you like it:) (hmm i hope this is good dont really know this is my first time writing a novel what do you guys think?)