Reincarnated as gluttony spirit

"max.... max.... " everything was slowly fading in darkness with faint wishper of his name ... as if some one was desperately calling him ... but eventually darkness swallow everything and in semi-consciousness state his soul was pulled to an amazing world and he was reincarnated in an mythical creature ... *guys it's my first novel * * plzz support me with new ideas and suggestions* * let's built an ultimate fantasy book together *