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Reborn as a Diablos in fate?!

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I am new but i will make this the best that i can make it. Jackson was going home from his work when the most cliche thing had happen, a child wanting to rush home had crossed the street not noticing the truck rushing down the street as though a mad man was behind the wheel, but Jackson noticed and reading those fanfic and novel had filled him in thought so he took his chance's in his belief and rushed to the child.

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Having read up to chapter 18, I think I'm qualified enough to rate this book.As of chapter 18, these are all the things I have to say, I'll list them below.1. The pacing and length of the chapters are way too slow and short. As of chapter 18, apparently, only 2-3 days have passed since Mc's rebirth.2. The grammar is straight up horrendous, and it doesn't even seem like a narration. It feels like a summary of the story that the author is just writing down and publishing. At most points in the story, the author is only making comparisons with other things describing what the Mc is doing, which in my opinion is not bad, but he does it almost every paragraph and it's getting repetitive and annoying to read all the time. The comparisons are quite ludicrous. Forgive me, for I have forgotten what the term is called in English, for I've finished school for a while now.3. The fight scenes are very lackluster and boring, and I just scan through them with the most bored look gracing my face.4. The author seems to lack a lot when it comes to writing ability and I hope he learns from this and gets better, I only kept reading cause I happened to like both monster hunters and fate and him bringing those ideas together drew in my attention, but I was severely disappointed when I started reading.I hope the author can improve his writing and Grammer in general. Don't forget to use your capital letters and apostrophes. You're not doing that a lot.I had a lot more than this to say, but I seemed to have forgotten, so just go with that for now 😅

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