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Fisch_in_1_Bowl
Fisch_in_1_BowlLv141yr
2023-07-13 19:23

a concept that IS really interesting. there are only 2 chapters Out as of now but both are of good quality. my only Hope is that this book doesnt Go into " i'm now human Form ". Overall its a solid read.

Reborn as a Diablos in fate?!

NUTTER_BUTTER
4.3
23 Chs

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Fisch_in_1_Bowl
Fisch_in_1_BowlLv14

also thats my Personal preferens but pls No Harem. IT can Ruin a Story increadibly fast and also Hes a wyvern... anyway your book at the end of the day. (⁠◠⁠‿⁠・⁠)⁠—⁠☆

1yr
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DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

harems don't ruin a story the author making a harem but not wanting to put in the necessary effort to do it right ruins a story just like not doing anything right can ruin a story. Put the blame where it belongs on the author not a genre. Also what does him being a wyvern an excuse for it not to be a harem after all there might be some female wyverns later or he gets a human form or better a humanoid form.

Fisch_in_1_Bowl:also thats my Personal preferens but pls No Harem. IT can Ruin a Story increadibly fast and also Hes a wyvern... anyway your book at the end of the day. (⁠◠⁠‿⁠・⁠)⁠—⁠☆
1yr
6
Fisch_in_1_Bowl
Fisch_in_1_BowlLv14

nuh uh

DragonkingKyo:harems don't ruin a story the author making a harem but not wanting to put in the necessary effort to do it right ruins a story just like not doing anything right can ruin a story. Put the blame where it belongs on the author not a genre. Also what does him being a wyvern an excuse for it not to be a harem after all there might be some female wyverns later or he gets a human form or better a humanoid form.
1yr
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Taste_The_Rainbow_8941
Taste_The_Rainbow_8941Lv4

Having read up to chapter 18, I think I'm qualified enough to rate this book.As of chapter 18, these are all the things I have to say, I'll list them below.1. The pacing and length of the chapters are way too slow and short. As of chapter 18, apparently, only 2-3 days have passed since Mc's rebirth.2. The grammar is straight up horrendous, and it doesn't even seem like a narration. It feels like a summary of the story that the author is just writing down and publishing. At most points in the story, the author is only making comparisons with other things describing what the Mc is doing, which in my opinion is not bad, but he does it almost every paragraph and it's getting repetitive and annoying to read all the time. The comparisons are quite ludicrous. Forgive me, for I have forgotten what the term is called in English, for I've finished school for a while now.3. The fight scenes are very lackluster and boring, and I just scan through them with the most bored look gracing my face.4. The author seems to lack a lot when it comes to writing ability and I hope he learns from this and gets better, I only kept reading cause I happened to like both monster hunters and fate and him bringing those ideas together drew in my attention, but I was severely disappointed when I started reading.I hope the author can improve his writing and Grammer in general. Don't forget to use your capital letters and apostrophes. You're not doing that a lot.I had a lot more than this to say, but I seemed to have forgotten, so just go with that for now 😅

1yr

NUTTER_BUTTER
NUTTER_BUTTERAuthor

why'd i vote 5 stars my own work? because I have faith in myself, yes I'm shameless and I don't careIf you have any complaints do type them in the comments I do want to improve and their is a difference between constructive criticism and just criticism just tell where I need to improve and I'll see what I can do.

1yr
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

Well, the prologue is horrible. I jumped in front of a car waiting for brother isekai. is it serious And not to mention wishes. Apart from that, the chapters are fine, it is not the best or the worst

1yr
alexguire_deguire
alexguire_deguireLv12

Je suis au chapitre 14-15 J'aime l'idée. Je ne peux pas en dire beaucoup vue qu'il y a juste 14~15 chapitres mais d'après moi ça va dans la bonne direction D'habitude quand on prend un monstre de Monster hunter on prend un dragon ancien très puissant mais ici on prend un Diablo. La seule critique que j'ai est que certains personne pourrait ne pas bien comprendre comment augmenter les attributs, personnellement d'après ce que j'ai compris, si il veux augmenter sa statistiques de défense faut qu'il prend des coup et si ses ces muscles, il doit faire de la musculation (imaginer vous un Diablo qui fais des jumping jack) c'est ma compréhension il se peut que j'ai mal compris Ça c'est un message pour l'auteur : Merci pour ce livre et j'espère que vous abandonner pas, je serai triste 😭😭

1yr
Mea_Cu1pa
Mea_Cu1paLv3

No hay verdad en la carne, solo traición. No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad. No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia. No hay certeza en la carne, excepto la muerte

1yr
Bomberman
BombermanLv4

Using a W concept it can't really go that wrong.

1yr
meme_ink
meme_inkLv12

more more more more more more more more more

1yr
MovieMaster5
MovieMaster5Lv4

Only 21 chapter currently but it's good and i hope you won't drop it

1yr
Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4

Perfect, Down to the very last detail. Perfect. …………………………………………………. …………………………………………………. …………………………………………………. …………………………………………………. ………………………………………………….

1yr
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