One piece system in a cultivation world.

It's okay, a little stale on the story telling. A lot of rambling to himself. I guess it's a pass.

It is written very stupidly and causes a feeling of disgust when reading (10101010100101010100101010101010010101010101010100101010101010101010101010010101010101010101010101010101001010101)

very bad writing. Author puts chapters as author notes and also put immersion breaking narrations which kill the involvement of the reader. Also the idea of onepiece system is interesting but the execution of it is very bad and boaring. Example: the Author could take some other interesting Fruit which would make the reading much interesting. Also in a cultivation world the pace the MC is developing is very slow. Also mixing of onepiece system and cultivation makes is very uninteresting. The integrations between the characters is also not executed properly to keep the readers engaged. All the chapters feels very boring , lackluster and very short. I would like to see author improve and will edit this review later if it gets better.

For now I Shall leave and come back after more chapter

All hail the Gut feeling supreme!!!!!!!!

This is really good this has the potential to be one of the best fanfiction so this is good