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New Hope Academy

Tác giả: 816D35
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What is New Hope Academy

Đọc tiểu thuyết New Hope Academy của tác giả 816D35 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Yao Feng was a slave servant in the Wu clan. He had a very low position even among slaves. And because he was an orphan and had low aptitude in Qi cultivation, he was scorned and often, he got bullied...

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Yao Feng was a slave servant in the Wu clan. He had a very low position even among slaves. And because he was an orphan and had low aptitude in Qi cultivation, he was scorned and often, he got bullied because he can't protect himself. But today, Yao Feng's destiny will change. A wizard came to the clan and brought him along with thirteen other children. Then he took them to the New Hope academy. The place where Yao Feng will learn the western method of cultivation called "magic"... In a world of cruelty, Yao Feng will use this chance to pursues his ultimate goals and rise above all with his new power. -Temporary book cover, image does NOT belong to me. If you are the owner and want it taken down please notify me-

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NIKAH KONTRAK JADI CINTA

Di sebuah bagian negara Indonesia. Suatu ketika, seorang Presdir dari Emperor Group, yang bernama Dipta Ramadhan, tidak di sengaja bertemu dengan seorang wanita yang meminta tolong kepada nya. Wanita itu sebut saja nama nya Andini Putri, atau bisa di panggil Andin. Andin hanyalah seorang wanita yang berlatar belakang biasa, dari rakyat bawah, yang pakaiannya kala itu sangat berantakan. Andin adalah seorang "Gelandangan" yang kini hidupnya sebatang kara, dan karena ketidak mampuan dirinya saat itu, Andin pun mencoba mencari pertolongan hingga ke jalan raya untuk menyelamatkan diri dari kejaran preman yang mau menangkapnya. Tanpa tahu siapa seorang yang ada di dalam mobil saat itu, Andin hanya merengek meminta tolong untuk membantunya, membawa dirinya pergi dari sana. Namun saat itu tidak ada yang mau membantunya, hingga Andin bernekat untuk mengakhiri hidupnya, dan menabrakan diri ke sebuah mobil truk yang sedang melaju. Dipta yang akhirnya merasa kasihan tanpa ragu langsung menghampiri dan menolongnya. Tuhan masih memberikan hidup pada Andin yang saat itu sudah hampir sekarat. Dipta langsung membawa Andin ke rumah sakit, dan juga dia yang membiayai semua tagihan untuk biaya hidup Andin. Hingga terjadilah sebuah rencana yang di anggap sebagai sebuah ganti rugi karena Dipta sudah merawatnya. Karena saat itu juga Dipta di desak oleh kedua orang tuanya untuk segera menikah. Jadi, dalam pikiran Dipta, dia berencana untuk mengajak Andin, wanita yang dia temui di jalanan, dan di rawatnya, untuk menikah di atas surat dengan nya, atau biasa di sebut sebagai "Nikah Kontrak" dalam menjalani pernikahannya itu, perlahan mereka mulai merasakan suka satu sama lain, dan waktu yang terus berlalu, membuat rasa cinta tumbuh dalam hati mereka. Mungkinkah mereka akan bersama selamanya, dan membuat pernikahan baru yang sah tanpa kontrak? Atau mereka berdua tetap akan berpisah setelah masa kontraknya selesai, dan menjalani hidup masing-masing yang berbeda satu sama lain?! . . "Memang nya kenapa? Siapa yang akan mempermalukan aku?" Dipta yang bertanya seakan tidak mengerti ucapan Andin. "Maksud ku, kamu kan orang terpandang, terkenal, juga kaya, jika menikah dengan ku yang hanya rakyat miskin biasa, juga hanya seorang gelandangan seperti ini, apa kata dunia mu nanti?" Kata Andin yang dengan yakin mengatakan nya. "Itu aku yang akan menanggung nya!" Jawab Dipta dengan santai. UNTUK TAHU KELANJUTAN SETELAHNYA, YUK BACA ISI BABNYA SAMPAI SELESAI. SELAMAT MEMBACA! ;-) . . #IG Author -> @dwisetya_98 => Dukung terus dengan bintang dan batu kuasa kalian ya guys, tambahkan ulasan kalian juga. Terimakasih :-)

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Lasila creates a dating profile at the insistence of her best friend when she graduates college and accepts a job for the Inter-Galactic Colonial Council. Lasila was about to embark on an adventure of a lifetime. She was now one of the leading anthropologists for the exploration teams. But the chances of her meeting anyone were pretty slim, except for her personal team. As she landed on the space station where she would be assigned to her new job Lasila was told about a site where she could meet people, it was called Gal-inder. But will this lead to lust, or love? For Lasila it would be hard to tell as she had never been romantically involved with anyone before. Perhaps it would lead to more than one encounter? Drusain had been on leave for over a year, and had finally gotten the medical clearance to go back to active duty. While he had been out on medical his social life had completely tanked. Even though he had been cleared for duty once more his commanding officer had deployed him and a small team to an outlying planet still being explored. Rather boring if you asked him. To top it off he would have a whole new team, none of his old squad had lived. Only him. It shouldn’t have bothered him much, as a Nav’illi he was trained from birth that emotions were a weakness and as such he had no need for them. But he was lonely. He wanted people to talk to, or a person. His commanding officer had suggested an inter-galactic dating site, said it would be good for him.

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Love So Near Yet So Far

In a relationship, betrayal will always be present and it's rare for loyalty. Pain and sadness for those who's been snatched of faith. Longing and envy for one-sided love. Regrets and repentance for those who's been coward to express their love. And despair for those who've been left behind. Love is almost necessary for anyone to have since it can make a person feel every kind of emotion that one would need, but what if someone was just ignorant to notice the obvious? What if there's someone who did everything in secret just to make the other one happy and even let go of their chances? What if there's someone who wants to correct things but was way already too late? A story of a man, who regrets everything he did and wants to change things but was already impossible, and a girl who did everything for her best friend, to the point she even gave her chastity, just for his smile. "You can't feel anything. You're just an invisible presence to her." "Why?..Why do I have to watch this?" "I can't tell you the reason." "Why?... I didn't do anything. I just.. love someone." Countless scenes appeared on the large screen. "Max... did you really love him?" "Max.. am I pretty in this dress?" "Max.. let's go there." "Max... I like you... as a friend!" "Max.. I don't want to see you cry." "Max.. why? Why can't you notice it?" A strangely familiar sweet voice keeps resounding throughout the isolated room, and manages to touch the deepest part of Max, but why he can't feel anything? Tears just subconsciously fall from his face every time he saw a scene, a painful yet numb feeling that would eat his heart, and an image of a woman seemed to be etched in his mind, haunting him nonstop. When will this end? When would this torture stop tormenting his broken heart? When can he get a chance to say the word he wants to say the most, I'm sorry, I've been such a fool!' I love you!? Note: Updates is unknown

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816D35
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Wars, magic competition, deaths, skimming, exciting fights, wizards, divination, witchcraft, potion concoction, character development... Thank you for liking my story.Let's get the first rank. Please help, use power stone to vote.

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*****Great Idea! ****** ***The start is slow.***** The story should begin in chapter 4. the 4 chapters before that, you can put them in a prelude. good luck

Kamatis
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Well, I didn't really noticed any wrong grammars, so the Writing quality is great! i actually remembered Akame Ga Kill on your story development. When I first saw your title, I thought It's similar to The Irregular At Magic High School and ither academy magic novels where the MC is OP as hell. Well, he's an underdog here. Well, all in all, your story is a good dark-fantasy. Just an advice, if you're going for the dark-fantasy genre, be sure to clearly emphasize the cold reality of life. Because that's the redeeming feature of a dark-fantasy.

f1n
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Not for the light-hearted. At the moment the story is pitch black, no hope. Yet that is all that a good underdog story needs. The first chapter is a little over the top. But a few more chapters in you can't wait to see everyone around him be killed so that the MC can claim his revenge. So far the story is 5/5 No grammar errors, nor is it hard to read at all.

Perizou
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This is a refreshing take on a cultivation novel. The mix of magic and qi is not forced and it's naturally placed together. When the reason why they exist and how they work shows up you can't help but go "Yeah, of course" The writing is clean and descriptive letting you fully immerse yourself in the story. although a few developments feel to be just for the plot is nothing that should be impossible or too far out in the context of the story. This is a great read and I'm excited to see it develop.

Sdrawkcab
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I believe the author is doing a great job in building the reader's understanding of the world. It is not a nice place where everyone accomplishes their goals in life. So far the MC has had no luck in anything, other than talking his way out of being killed. I think if the author wishes to continue, there needs to be more description of the world and the side characters. What the MC is thinking would help for the readers to feel for him. I understand not wanting to give everything away for plot development, but his emotions and feelings create empathy for him. He is a child, so a little more of his actions showing that would help. When he gets hit, does he fall to the floor and start to sob? Pulling his legs in to make himself as small of a target as possible? Does it hurt enough to make him scream and cry? Put yourself into his position and try to imagine what you would do in order to build a sympathy with him. If you get good enough at describing how he feels, your readers will feel those same emotions as they read. Good Luck!

Sigheti
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While I believe the story to have potential, I believe the execution could be improved. Until now, I have yet to sympathise with the characters as they appear rather bland and, due to this, I fail to engage with the story. But, as I mentioned, they do have the potential to become great characters. While poor grammar may now and then disrupt the flow of the story, I am aware that this is a fault that can only be improved by practice (I am certainly no stranger to this myself).

ResidentialPsycho
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I love the concept, and it could make for a funny story. At this point, it's hard to see what direction the writer wants to take. There is no comedy or action so far. There is some drama. Other violent events were mentioned, they are completely off-screen, so no one should have a problem with them. If you are the faint of heart, don't worry--there's nothing graphic so far. It looks like it's going into magic and cultivation, but very little of either thing has been mentioned. It looks like it's supposed to give a dark feeling, but it doesn't do that or make me want to cheer for the protagonist at all. The traumatic events are brushed over pretty quickly. Background information? What's that? A little information has been revealed about the MC's parents, but it's provided in a manner of telling rather than showing. The details of past events are very vague, making them difficult to picture. World background? Not revealed yet. There is no character depth at all so far. The character details are essentially limited to male, female, mother, father, and mean person. I don't think there's been any imagery at all thus far except for describing the MC's appearance. A greater use of imagery could evoke a more emotional response in readers. Although the MC is an eight-year-old who is 4'11," the height of a small *****, no explanation is given for this. Although there are only six chapters so far, there are logical inconsistencies present already, especially in regards to character actions and the absent world setting. The writer uses "sh!t" a lot as a substitution for other words, making it feel very overused. I'm not sure if there's been a chapter thus far without this curse word. The writing quality could use some review. The events in the story could be expanded upon with more detail and elaboration to pull readers into the story. Everything happens so fast, it leaves me wondering what the point of anything was. Nearly every sentence has at least one obvious grammatical error or typo. Tenses flicker between past and present tense. There are also examples of passive tense, even in sentences important to the plot line. These types of errors are common to new writers. That said, the story is readable. Overall, I'd say the concept is interesting, but the follow-through needs some work.

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MeriemR
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The idea is great, I like that you are giving it your own twist. However, the grammar and style are lacking, This, I am sure you can improve by re-reading and editing. One of the main things is switching between present and past in your narration. Another thing that I struggled with is empathizing with the MC. I think you should delve deeper into his emotions and feelings so that the reader can relate more. Other than that, great effort. Good luck with the contest!!

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