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NEVERLANDERS REUNITED

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Fantasy
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A guy who lied his online friend about his love story . That guy have a fantasy about his love story and about his future , he wants to be an a Drama writer and want a dramatic love story in his life . Then one day he had a fantasy that his online friend called him and tell him about a competition and also having a fantasy about that he meted that girl he also want in his life . Then he got a nap and he wake up , and then things started going like in his fantasy he got a call from his friend about a competition and meted that girl from his fantasy . But now he wants to know how things started going like this , everything from his fantasy coming true , everyone from his fantasy showing in real world , Including Villain Now he doesn’t want everything to go like his fantasy He doesn’t want to lose that girl Do you think he was able to save that girl and himself and found the reasons how things started come true?

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Devaleena_Das_0640
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Arjun this is great ✨I absolutely loved the plot and the characters .. but the story piling up is messy ..U can focus on maintaining the flow otherwise I enjoyed it ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Sanrika_Seni
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author... the plot is very good and realistic. I absolutely loved the idea but maybe after writing try to run your eyes through what you've just written. Don't take this as a negative comment but kindly do so. In many parts there are some spelling errors which I know is not done intentionally, while writing digitally typing mistakes occur... even for me😅 Overall very nice... I've commented on your paragraphs, kindly check them out. Also, please view my novel and comment on the plot...

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