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Naruto: Puppet Master

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Đọc tiểu thuyết Naruto: Puppet Master của tác giả trudny1 được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Egon Hartmann was a mechanical researcher, in a world which as it's path of progress chose biological primacy.Throughout his entire life he was scorned by his 'peers', his achievements and vision look...

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Egon Hartmann was a mechanical researcher, in a world which as it's path of progress chose biological primacy. Throughout his entire life he was scorned by his 'peers', his achievements and vision looked down upon from those in the 'right' mindset. Spurned by the society he delved into more dangerous and hazardous projects which resulted in his untimely demise. Now witness the scorned become the respected... Discord link: https://discord.gg/5hXDQhhqxU

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trudny1
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Okay, so this IS NOT a self review - I dislike the idea, I copied it from a user that posted it, but for some reason it's not visible, so I'm just reposting it bellow (with jpg proof) (Had to split it in few parts, check comments to the review): Before you read this review all I can say that this is a long review, if you got no time then just skip it and overall it is a good fic. Also there will be bits of spoilers in here. Anyways, Writing quality = 5 The writing in this fic is well made, sure there are few hiccups of spelling and grammar mistakes but it can be totally ignored. It’s way far from it being written in cave men language and you later having a stroke. Trust me I read many fics with both horrible spelling and grammar. (I’am still mentally recovering) Updating stability = 5 All I can say that the updates are consistent, though I do not mind delays, I can be patient for about a month or two maybe half a year if I don’t feel like reading. Character design = 5 What can I say, I like the character’s look and I’m fond of his personality, well done author! World development = 5I can’t say much about it, overall it sounds promising, I started to become optismistic when the character showed signs of inventing stuff at chapter 6, which will bring some changes to the Shinobi world. (though I won’t say that alarm clocks will make a major impact on the world, but I’m sure that there might be inventions that will bring heavy changes or even moderate changes) Story developments = 5 Now listen, I wish I could give this a 10 star rating. The reason is that the story is just so, so very unique and original that it’s hard to find in this app. It’s one of those needles in a haystack, a fricking golden needle that is worth a lot.

himitsu_desuu
himitsu_desuuLv14himitsu_desuu

i like this ffn a lot!! 1)it is not in konoha 2)it involves a line of interesting characters like sasori and pakura that were never really explored before. 3)the interactions between characters are very natural and so far the progress of the story is very good. 4)AND IT IS ABOUT PUPPET MASTER!! i have always wanted one but it is very hard to find. sadly not really that many people read this ffn... i guess because there is no "naruto" in the title so it's harder to find?

Alpha_Idiot
Alpha_IdiotLv4Alpha_Idiot

I decided to give this one a five star rating simply because I find the beginning interesant. Normally I skip the first chapter of such stories, but here I decided to give it a try and it didn't disappoint. Author-san should definitely keep writing this Fanfic.

SuperDemon
SuperDemonLv3SuperDemon

Unique Plot and MC is kind of original rather than some MCs learning Chidori and Rasengan in their toddler years. Another good point is that he doesn't seem to have any prior knowledge of Naruto. Keep up the good work Author-san!

Kilowann
KilowannLv4Kilowann

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SimplyAwesome
SimplyAwesomeLv3SimplyAwesome

SimplyAwesome just like me. Read it. . .. ... .... ..... ...... ....... ........ ....... ...... ..... .... ... .. . .................................

black_lamp
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UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12UndeadBeing

The one thing I hate on this site is when the authors just insert an oc and change nothing about the events, I get that you like the story but at this point just rewrite narutos personality, do something different, I've read and watched the arcs, I came her for a fanfic not a retelling. anyway that rant out of the way, I'll update this review if I drop it, I'll put faith in the author to not do a harem and I heard that he's going to a different village so I'll put faith that the mc doesn't -Explitive-Ride the main cast and retell the same story like we haven't read hundreds of konoha inserts.

WhiskeredCat
WhiskeredCatLv4WhiskeredCat

It's a very nice work, obviously care is taken, I like your work. I found a mistake, I don't remember the chapter . I know that magnetic escape is not a kekkei genkai but the power of ichibi created by sealing. Thx for great job.

FirstHumanWolf
FirstHumanWolfLv4FirstHumanWolf

The plot is good so far. Mc personality is also decent. The background building is not at the same level but, there might not be much to say when the village is in a desert. The trio's friendship is refreshing and not stiff......I am not very good at writing reviews so that's all I have. Hope this motivates you to write more author.

abhay001
abhay001Lv4abhay001

the story is good...so is the plot development ..it is an interesting idea...i have read a lot of Naruto fanfic...but not so much where technology is much used.. looking forward to

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