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My diary system in Marvel

After transmigrating into the Marvel universe, Luke had awaken the Diary Entry System. As long as whoever that holds the diary believes and trusts in what was written, then Luke would be rewarded by his system. The stronger the trust value, the better the rewards. Editor note: Hello guys! I am not the author, nor am I a translator of this fanfic. I am simply a normal guy heavily editing an MTL of the raw "People are writing diaries in Marvel, and the Avengers are all confused". I saw some others on this app who are attempting to edit the chapters, such as "Elephas" or "BlackGoku222" but I find their edits rather lackluster. And since I am interested in reading this further, I thought i'd do the rest of us a favor of putting out my edited version of the MTL. Please note that the characters will be slightly AU. If you think that my edited version is different from the original or other versions, you would be right as I included my own elements and removed some extra information in order to try to make the story as congruent as possible. Honestly guys, the MTL is so confusing. Lastly, I will TRY my best to make this story as readable as humanely possible, but no promises for a 5-star edit as my English language was only a B3. And thanks for taking the time to read this! (Gib me cookies/stones please) (Cover pic by Nariva Amynia on DevianArt. This is not an original work, I own absolutely nothing except my own deviations to the original fanfiction!)

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*Rewrite and update*

It has come to my attention in a recent review of someone, that my chapter uploads are misleading. In the review the person claimed that a large chunk of my chapters are filled with my notes, and while I agree I had put my notes in the chapter itself for my earlier chapters. But starting from Volume 2, I.E C66, I put my notes into an [A/N] comment instead.

I think what irked me the most was him stating that like 40% of the chapter was just my notes and not the chapter content itself xD So i tested it out. In C6, I had a long and wordy note at the end. the Chapter word count i stated was 2.3k. Well, after deleting the note, chapter count was 2.1k. .-. While not the exaggerated 40%, 10% is still quite high. And that struck a chord with me. 

So for now, I'm going to start re-writing the chapters from the start and making sure that it's all streamlined for ease of reading for new readers. Old readers, you're gonna have to wait a bit for a new upload, as I want to build up my chapter stock. Right now i've got C92 done and am currently working on C93. 

As we reach the ending point of Volume 2, here are the following chapters i have planned

C92 - Wanda Maximoff: The Light and The Dark. (Now available on p@t).

C93 - Iron Man vs Iron Monger. (Currently in the works.)

C94 - Unlikely Alliance!

C95 - I am Luke Sullivan.

C96 - The Future is in My Hands.

End of Volume 2.