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Narcos was driving through the streets of New York in his new Lamborghini Aventador looking for girls to pick up. As the son of a famous mafia boss, he practically got whatever he wanted, whenever he wanted it. The process didn't really matter to him, only the results did.

From the tender age of six, his retired grandfather Percocet, who had created the whole mafia empire, had been training him to take over from his dad after his dad retired. He never saw his parents much since they were always busy. He was taught a lot of stuff ranging from martial arts to culinary skills. His grandfather was incredibly harsh on him, he felt so many times he was going to break from the intense training but somehow he managed to survive it.

As he cruised down the street, high up in the air a giant tear ripped through the sky, it felt like space itself was torn apart by a terrifyingly huge scissors. Narcos was so horrified he almost hit another car on the road then he saw a huge hand which appeared almost instantaneously and ripped the sky apart.

Mayhem descended in New York, a lot of people were running around screaming, some were committing all sorts of heinous crimes. Narcos sped his car to the hospital where his grandpa was hospitalized he felt deep in his soul that he wouldn't live beyond today he wanted to see the person he loved most in the world before their doom.

Before Narcos reached the hospital a huge suction force started pulling the earth towards the tear, Narcos started floating in the air, the force got stronger and stronger some building started breaking down as a result of this phenomena. People started dying in space due to the lack of oxygen before entering the tear in the space. Narcos was calm whiles all this was happening he felt truly helpless cause he couldn't do anything about it, before reached the end of the atmosphere he felt something calling him within his soul, he saw some white shining items coming towards him at a high speed.

Narcos held his breath when he reached space but he felt his blood boiling from the heat of the sun, The two objects got close enough for him to see it was a pair of eyeballs then they pierced through his head. "ugggggggggghhhhhh" Narcos screamed from the excessive pain in his head, then he felt like someone had gave him a strong kick to his stomach as all the air got sucked out by the vacuum. All Narcos saw was black.

The first chapter is relatively short, just wanted to give a background of the character and throw away his past life before we get down to business.

First time writing a novel criticism and comments are welcomed.

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