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LEGEND: RISE OF THE BLACK PHOENIX

Cultivation is a Legend, a myth that ordinary people only heard in stories. Contrary to what people believed, cultivators do exist, hiding in plain sight. To make up for the lack of essence Qi on Earth, a group of cultivators "The Consortium" developed LEGEND, a VIRTUAL REALITY SYSTEM to help them enhance their skills. To cultivators and martial artist, LEGEND is world where they could practice and develop their skills. To ordinary people, it is a world of entertainment, adventure. To wealth seekers, it is a world of business, opportunities and treasures. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Feng Ji Xuan, a top expert in the game after playing for 15 years was betrayed and killed by his Fiancée because of the Family inheritance left by his grandfather.  In a moment which he thought all was lost, Feng Ji Xuan finds himself 20 years back into the past with the Ancestral ring at his finger. A ring which he thought was the reason of his second chance. Follow our MC as he regains himself, not for revenge but to become strong as he strive to find answers about cultivator's legend. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------  This is my first work. English is not my first language so please bear with me and be kind on your comments, Okay? Please support my work if you find it interesting. My aim writing this novel is to improve my English. However, the story left me entranced so I keep on writing it. I appreciate any constructive criticism from you my Dear Readers.  Some places and names in this novel features China’s famous places and people. I will appreciate your advice if you find any mistakes. I’m not familiar with China’s traditions and customs, so I apologize in advance if I wrote offending words. Thank you. -------------------------------------------------- Weekly chapter release rate: 7 ch/week --- Jhex_zone

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Author's Announcement

Hello My Avid Readers,

First of all, I can't thank you enough for following and reading my first attempt to write a web novel, despite my inadequacy and inexperience as a newbie writer. So from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU!

Your comments and constructive criticisms had helped me a lot.

However, I regret to inform you that I'll temporarily hold off the release of new chapters for a while as I have been receiving messages from other Authors and readers that I should fix the more obvious grammatical errors and some plot holes of the story first as they are putting off readers. I'll try my best to somehow reduce those obvious ones if not eliminate them.

Hence, I decided to edit the chapters especially the early ones and consistently use 3rd person POV past tense as much as possible.

Hope to see you soon everyone.

You could leave comments or suggestions here as I will be checking and possibly include them in the edited version as I see fit.

I will soon delete this series and release the edited version with a slightly different title.

Again, Thank You!!!

-Jhex_zone