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Exploring the World of To Love Ru

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Đọc tiểu thuyết Exploring the World of To Love Ru của tác giả Ayries_Jesea được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Most of the chapters are about 2000 words A boy reincarnating in To love Ru with a System, but here comes the problem he was not ready and made a mistake in making his wishes that he kinda regrets for...

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Most of the chapters are about 2000 words A boy reincarnating in To love Ru with a System, but here comes the problem he was not ready and made a mistake in making his wishes that he kinda regrets for days. Now finding himself in a world where aliens can be anywhere from being weak as an insect to being too powerful that can blast planets, how will he survive. The story will start horrible since I am new to writing but I think it improve on the later chapters. P.S the name of the OC is kinda unique and kinda funny but if you search, it kinda had a good history. All the characters except my Ocs are not mine, they belong to their respective owners. I also don't own the Profile cover. This is my first try at making fanfic so please don't complain if I made a mistake as I will just try to fix it. I don't even get even one penny on this it's totally free

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[BL] Sharehouse in the VIA

The VIA, a prestigious school filled will all sort of oddballs. Some are adapting, others are still filled with venom, some are happy, others cautious. The school is set in a world filled with different interspecies people forced to come to terms with finding peace amongst each other after an agreement. One cold and unapproachable vampire king, an overly annoyed creature, a small cute friendly yet dangerous merman, and a human find themselves living together in a sharehouse dorm located within the VIA property. Four boys with different species and personalities, along with clashing ideals live amongst each other trying to not only navigate school life but relationships with each other and simply trying to stay alive in the human’s case. With his species already going on extinction, being one of the few humans who remain, he needs to survive no matter what, but how can he when his roommates are literal magic entities who’s cough could kill him? ——————————————————————— “What a frail creature.” A man with long silvery white hair and ice blue eyes says before turning on his heel. He wore a long sleeve-like garment that nearly touched the floor when he walked and was stunning. His hair too, nearly reached the carpet of the rug he was standing on if it weren’t for the hairpieces in his head tying his hair up all the way. His body was much paler than the average person’s, leading him to believe that was very much not a human but a vampire. He couldn’t his fangs thanks to the sleeves over his mouth, but he had a feeling. “Ahem.” Someone coughed. ——————————————————————— Turning, he craned his neck again and saw a second man with grey-like hair and a blue streak at the top. That man was huge for a vampire but this one was much larger. He could see fangs and a tail. “Uhm, sorry.” He said while moving out of the way. Vampires do not have tails was his first instinct but he could not think of any other species. To be fair, humans do not often see other people since they do not leave the village. The man had striking red eyes and carried an air of confidence. ——————————————————————— His first impression was bad with not only one roommate, but the third as he wandered into the kitchen. A small child who had cotton candy pink hair with peach eyes and a thin body. “You don’t need to help me, idiot.” The boy said as he reached for a plate he had been trying to grab, taking him aback. Was that a fairy? Perhaps an elf by the looks but this child definitely didn’t seem in college. He was just trying to be nice! “Ah sorry, whoopsy!” The pink-haired boy said with a smile and it was like hearts were in his eyes. Did… he just do a personality change? ——————————————————————— a tragic comedy of school life mixed with romance. no concrete update schedule nor word-count. [bl] [slice-of-life] [campus] [roommates]

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Greed_X
Greed_XLv4Greed_X

Of course there will be lemons, right? If not, the reader will be disappointed .

Woshi
WoshiLv5Woshi

The worse type of grammar is one that tries to sound correct but have errors here and there. It's readable but not for me. A tip for non English writers/speakers, say the sentence out loud and see if it sounds right or not. If you're not sure reference other grammatically correct novels or use a writing tool. (Grammarly)

TFH
TFHLv6TFH

5☆ for good taste. do you plan to write lemons/şêx?. Mikan and Lala best waifus[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] will save and allow chapters to accumulate first

Zaylent
ZaylentLv4Zaylent

Finally a To Love Ru with daily updates proper lemons yep expecting not to drop this fic..................................................................

Kitsune_Raijin
Kitsune_RaijinLv14Kitsune_Raijin

The concept of the story is good, the mc feels a little hollow and the grammar needs some corrections to make it a smooth read. I think with some improvement it can become a great story.

Baqua
BaquaLv4Baqua

As a person that read countless fanfictions, I would like to edit your chapters if you want. Usually, even if the premise of your story is good, if your grammar is not that good many people will drop your novel because it ruins their reading experience. Even me, I'm currently reading chapter 3 but the grammar made me come here to criticize the grammar. This story looks good but the grammar is seriously ruining it, so if it's okay to you I would really like to edit your chapters grammatical errors.

Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv4Chaos_Order8

Now an important advice from a heavy FF reader. Please don't be impulse in increasing the mc powers, and making his strong or op very fast. Baby steps, build ur story structure with care, don't go and make him pick Pokémon left and right. But slowly build your charactersin development and interaction between female characters and the mc. Most hasty Characters development ends up with failure and dropping. I hope that I won't see another dropped FF. I have jsut said this because a lot of FF these days drop Half way.

Maybeshewill
MaybeshewillLv2Maybeshewill

Man it’s so tough to read 😂 But it’s quite interesting even though I’m suffering! You should stop using past tense verbs as much as you do, and try to learn basic sentence structuring, so that you don’t mess up the order. Just genuine advise, I think if you stick to it, you’d be able to improve the story 20-30% Everything is great man, never stop learning and trying!

Erl_Rol
Erl_RolLv1Erl_Rol

Everyone should give it a try although it starts horrible for a couple of chapters, it started to improve. Maybe you will quit after a couple of chapters but you try a couple more as it might be up on your taste.

Lucifer515
Lucifer515Lv4Lucifer515

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MIR_Sajeeb
MIR_SajeebLv14MIR_Sajeeb

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KingParadox
KingParadoxLv1KingParadox

Well here goes my humble review it's the typical to love tu story where the mc is rito's brother I haven't seen any that aren't like that lol well starting with the mc it's ok he's not whiny and he's not a wish fulfillment mc on that side ok, the powers thing well they don't really make sense the guy is strong as a nuclear bomb but I don't think there are fights in to love tu so it doesn't really matter. as far as relationships with the characters not much has been developed other than family, overall it's well done. Things you might not like about the novel (50/50 for me). *The mc helps rito confess to Haruna and literally there are chapters about it or at least one mention per chapter of rito confessing can be annoying. *Raikou from fate is in the novel and the chapters so far only focus on her so if you're expecting to read about characters from to love tu you'll have to wait a bit even though he has advancements with lala. *constant repetition of her trap appearance may be annoying to some. Overall it's a good novel but don't look to insert yourself into the main character and just enjoy reading it.

Aymen_Bensaada
Aymen_BensaadaLv4Aymen_Bensaada

hello author-san can you please include the ovas, and thank you for this story please continue and drop it .[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

shyfix291
shyfix291Lv4shyfix291

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Domo_Domo_7296
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Iam_Handsome100
Iam_Handsome100Lv1Iam_Handsome100

I don't know about others but I like it a lot it's perfectly in my taste. It's a harem but it didn't feel force as the love between the mc and the girls were cultivated by time. The mc is also quite powerful but it didn't mean he was the strongest which is another like from me

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